|Reviews for SAMPLE ENTRY Slavery of the Heart|
| Beulah chapter 1 . 4/25
Hello, i absolutely loooved this! you write so intelligently and grammatically correct it makes me so happy! haha yeah im a grammar nazi and also a fanfiction lover. Not a good combination most of the time because most fanfics are written badly but this was dantastic and i really loved the storyline! keep up the good work!
| Marlene3658 chapter 1 . 5/26/2015
Aré you going to do another chapter because i love it
| babyvfan chapter 1 . 11/1/2014
wow. wow. wow wow wow. For a sample entry, it sure as hell was amazing. Well-written, nice flow, good description. The other entries have big shoes to fill
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/10/2013
chapter 2 where is it !
| mialove1 chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
OOMMMMMGGGGGGGGGG. I WOULD SO WANT EDWARD TO BE MY MASTER... BEST STORY EVER please add more.
| VampChick76 chapter 1 . 9/2/2012
I love the one-shot!
| twilightobession chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
I love this story. I really hope you will continue it after the contest. I am putting it on alert. Hope to hear from you.
| Purple Majestic chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
i like this story a lot.
| Edward's spouse chapter 1 . 5/27/2012
| ArodLoverus2001 chapter 1 . 2/5/2012
| TooLazy4aPenName chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
Please! Can you continue this?
| emmettismymonkeyman chapter 1 . 11/28/2011
Even though this is just a 'sample story' or entry, i think it would've made a great story. Just Saying..
| ElleCullen17 chapter 1 . 10/29/2011
| Team-Cullen-Boyz-101 chapter 1 . 10/15/2011
| Erikajo chapter 1 . 9/26/2011
Very nice! :)