Reviews for The Geek and the Cardboard Girl
Kalki15 chapter 18 . 12/27/2013
Oh my Gosh, I love this story. I really love your writing, and especially the fact that the characters are not how they were in the books. In some fanfics on this site, I like how the characters are similar to the one in the saga, but it's also nice having them OOC at times (ex: Angela is the nosy neighbor in YOUR story, but the usual friend of Bella's in others, Alice is the stern boss instead of Bella's chirpy pixie, etc ...) Well done! I love it :D
Dolly chapter 18 . 7/15/2012
Fantastic story. I loved this for multiple reasons; how you depicted Edward as a geek and an opposite Alice. Most of the fanfictions show Edward as a beautiful, handsome man at first sight; but this is the first story I've read that is unique and different. Great grammar as well, I love reading stories that can keep that up. Loved the plot. Definitely one of my favorites! Keep up the good writing. x
Pianogirl05 chapter 18 . 10/23/2011
Great story! Glad you didn't have her make amends with Alice. It would have been completely out of character for the story.
Pianogirl05 chapter 17 . 10/23/2011
I love that you didn't make Alice all bubbles and flowers.
Pianogirl05 chapter 16 . 10/23/2011
Awe, Em would be so proud right now!
Pianogirl05 chapter 4 . 10/23/2011
I was wondering if they might meet in the ER.
Pianogirl05 chapter 2 . 10/23/2011
That is certainly a different Alice. Honestly, her getting fired is a blessing for her. What kind of boss expects an employee to stand in the pouring rain in a cardboard outfit? What a...! Great chapter.
Pianogirl05 chapter 1 . 10/23/2011
Great first chapter. It's so funny to read about Edward's character being portrayed in this manner.
siobhan.22 chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
Good chapter
SiaChia69 chapter 18 . 10/8/2011
Great story it's so cute I loved it!
savannavansmutsmut chapter 18 . 5/3/2011
This was a wonderful story I really enjoyed it. I am happy to see it is complete. I was worried I was going to be left hanging. Mark it complete so people will read it.
MsCat chapter 18 . 4/29/2011
I thought this was just such a lovely story. I totally agree that there is enough angst in the real world, and plenty other fanfics as well, and it was just the perfect tale of Bella and Edward finding each other. I really loved how sweet your Edward was! I don't care how cheesy them getting engaged was, I loved it. Great story!
Peace.Love.CSI chapter 18 . 4/3/2011
AW! That was so cute, I love your plot and how you made Edward a geek(;

Your portrayal of the characters was pretty true to life, and I like that about your writing. You mixed in some fluff with the drama and kept it interesting. You're a great writer, keep writing! :D
naty1121 chapter 18 . 3/22/2011
ohhh I just loved this story! One of my favorites... is nice to read a fluffy and uncomplicated Edward and Bella story :)
Now and Forever true chapter 18 . 3/12/2011
Love it

It's really good
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