|Reviews for Something About Bees|
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/23
Excellent story but epi pens are injected in to the outer thigh
| ccase13 chapter 1 . 8/9/2011
That bee show was awful. I felt especially bad for Jared and Jensen having to do that scene for a living.
| SupernaturallyEgocentric chapter 1 . 6/16/2011
Good story, very well done.
| judyann chapter 1 . 10/7/2010
I love this story! I am just starting to go through and read all your stories so give me a little bit but try to review every one! You are very talented and love all your stories so far!
| Swellison chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
Nice entry for the Summer. I like how you used Dean's point of view to write a decidedly Sam-centered story. I do like Dean's comment about the long night (a subtle dig at the ep, that made the night seem, like 3 seconds long?:-))
| DawnTwilight chapter 1 . 8/30/2010
I love limp Sam and so I like how you made him suffer, I mean how you showed us another way the ep could have ended. Thanks for sharing :)
| Dipenates chapter 1 . 8/29/2010
Nice job! I really liked the insight into Sam and John's relationship.
| Madebyme chapter 1 . 8/19/2010
This was a great read! Full of tense but believable h/c, some lovely brotherly moments and a nice dollop of freaked out Dean.
I must admit that is isn't one of my favourite episodes but I really enjoyed your alternative ending, with one too many bee stings for Sam giving him an allergic reaction. And what a nice touch that Matt the bug lover is allergic and that his father didn't know. Giving them the prefect opportunity to open up a much needed father/son discussion.
This flowed really smoothly and everything fit into what we saw on screen. Very entertaining. Thanks for sharing. Take care, Madebyme
| Marianna Morgan chapter 1 . 8/18/2010
Oh, how I LOVE this story! So intense when Dean's begging Sam to breathe...and then the bro mo when Dean's holding his unconscious little brother...and then his initial protectiveness when Matt wants to use the Epi-Pen...and just...GUH. LOVE! Thank you for posting! Is it greedy to ask for MORE? :)
| Scullspeare chapter 1 . 8/17/2010
Awesome job creating a great story from a so-so episode.
Some lovely brotherly moments, and I love the idea that a simple allergy can take a Winchester down when ghoulies and ghosties can't.
And you made me shudder with that description of the dead bees falling out of Dean's clothes. Ugh!
Thanks for a wonderful read.
| Nana56 chapter 1 . 8/17/2010
Aw, really, really good. That's a very scary thing! Not being able to breathe, or watching someone go through it is horrific! I could feel it from Sam's POV and also from Dean's.
Very well done. :)
| supernaturalsammy67 chapter 1 . 8/16/2010
AW MY GOD! I LOVE YOU!
SERIOUSLY! THE MOST AMAZING THING! AHHH! :) xxxxx
i loved your description when Sam couldn't breathe!
| Ash8 chapter 1 . 8/16/2010
Yay! You gave us some lovely limp!sam after Bugs.
And you used an Epi-Pen! (Man, the amount of times I've been shown how to use one of those things... great to see it in a fic... :D)
I really enjoyed that. Lovely tie into Matt and his bugs as well. :)
| skag trendy chapter 1 . 8/16/2010
Nice alternate ending, hon. Thoroughly enjoyed reading about Dean holding Sam in his arms and begging him to breathe... breaks your heart!
| pandora jazz chapter 1 . 8/15/2010
I enjoyed reading your story.
Loved the alternate ending for "Bugs", yours was much more exciting than the real one.
Always enjoy reading any stories from the first or second season, helps remind me why I fell in love with the brothers and the show.
Thanks for sharing your story with us.