Reviews for This Heart
caiusaromarcus chapter 3 . 9/12/2010
No! Not Carmen and Irina! No!
caiusaromarcus chapter 2 . 9/12/2010
Poor Alice can't even see Jasper...
caiusaromarcus chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
And Leah almost had Victoria too...
Zikare chapter 4 . 9/12/2010
Yay! It's finished! Love it!
MRS.waitforit.STARK chapter 4 . 9/11/2010
There.
Zikare chapter 3 . 9/5/2010
Alec and Jane fighting over the music- LOL

The puppies tried to kill me. Apparently they are afraid of water." - LOL, very funny

A recently changed and quite useless newborn introduced him to texting. - LOL. So far this story is way funnier than this love!

"But Jasper is on patrol tonight." Alice whimpered.

- Jacob better not interfer when Jasper is on patrol! jasper will eat him and make him calm about it!

But, what if you can't see Jacob because you never drank Jacob." - yes, I love it! Drink Jacob now!

I thought Kate had black hair, not blond...oh, I just check the lexicon and it doesn't have a hair color listed, so I guess it could be blond...
MRS.waitforit.STARK chapter 2 . 9/1/2010
write more.
Zikare chapter 2 . 9/1/2010
There, I read all of your story, now you are morally obligated to read everything I ever write! Mawhahahahahahahahahahahahaha! This is worse than it sounds, as I has a paper on archaeal monophyly in the process of being published...

Bella, even as a newborn, is not supposed to be faster than Edward, 'cause he is super fast, even for a vamp.

A whole car-full, two even: I this meant two vampires at first...

Random question, in your story, do Bella and Edward engage in oral sex?

Maybe us Native American's don't like our Newon kempt! JK, LOL! I come from a whole family of Native American slobs.
Zikare chapter 1 . 9/1/2010
Victoria?

Oh, I like the prologue...Very prologuey
Noble Korhedron chapter 2 . 8/27/2010
Yeah, I know what you mean - I've seen good and bad Indian reservations depicted in multiple media... La Push sounds pretty cool - if a little impoverished due to it's small size/lack of opportunities! Still - they seem to make the best of what they've got rather than fall stay mired in poverty and semi-lawlessness like other naitve peoples, e.g. Austrailian Aboriginies.
MRS.waitforit.STARK chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
Megan, you have to get your next chapter finished. now.
sleepycat308 chapter 1 . 8/20/2010
hi my name is pat I'm 12 i live on the other side of the world in your point of view i love your stories keep writing them
Tommygrl1997 chapter 1 . 8/16/2010
Greattt! (:
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