Reviews for Blow Over
modestlobster chapter 1 . 9/9/2013
Great job - very cute description/evolution of his feelings for her. Keep up the nice work!
mugglehugger chapter 1 . 5/23/2012
Cute :) I liked it.
lydiamaartin chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
I thought this was a lovely freeverse about their relationship! I've always liked the idea of these two (partly because I don't like Remus/Tonks much) and I like how you portrayed it as starting out as a crush but becoming much deeper. It was really sweet and adorable!

Great job, and keep writing!
revolution rae chapter 1 . 12/21/2010
Wow:( This one is very sad, but very well-written. Splended:D

in sync chapter 1 . 10/20/2010
This was very sweet, and I think it was just /amazing/.

You've captured these two characters perfectly, and I love how you show time passing.

Not to mention the way you used the prompt- which added onto the poems amazingness.
sheriff stilinski chapter 1 . 10/10/2010
Awww. I love this. Absolutelylovelylovelylovely.


Okay, onto the next story!
Zombie Reine chapter 1 . 10/7/2010
B'awww this is so veryveryvery sweet! ;-;

My first ever Tonks/Charlie pairing and now I have to go run out and read MORE because of you Bee! :o

Ouch Charlie chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
i absolutely /love/ the way you wrote this!

and this made me wanna read more charlie/tonks(:
xxx-angelin-xxx chapter 1 . 8/29/2010
Aw... this was perfect! You wrote the poem wonderfully and the way you described Charlie's feelings and opinion on Tonks was so read! Great poem!
controlled climb chapter 1 . 8/28/2010
Beautiful. I love how you portray time passing. It's so sweet and well written.

It's so TONKS. The way he noticed so many littlelittle things about her is so incredibly sweet.

& it's great how you used the prompt! x3 Such brilliant usage.

Fantastic job well done!

& c2ed ;3
opaque-girl chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
I loved the startin.. It was fantastic.. It suited Tonks so perfectly D And the poem was done in a very nice and lovely manner.. It was well-written and the structure flowed nicely together D I loved this line:

overandoverandover – just to see him smile

It kinda also explains how Charlie never married - bec he lost the only girl he ever loved. And since I don't particularly like Remus/Tonks, I really enjoyed this D
MadameCissy chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
This was like it could have been one of my own thoughts put into words. Beautiful, lovely and powerful.

I am jealous of those who can do free verses. I cant do it. I admire those who can.
Morghen chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
Awww, this was really cute! I always wished that Charlie would have gotten married to someone and Tonks wouldn't have been a bad match. I liked how he didn't think that his interest in her would last but then he fell in love with her. I also loved how he saw things in her that no one else noticed - it was very sweet. You do an amazing job with freeverse!

a walk on the w i l d side chapter 1 . 8/21/2010
That is really good. I really like the structure, very...different, and very well-thought out.

Loved it, keep writing more.

lonely hands chapter 1 . 8/19/2010
I don't think I've ever read this pairing... it works (or, at least, you make it work) and I think I may have fallen in love, myself :)

I adored the ending :))
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