|Reviews for Outside|
| crunchie11 chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
I was bored so I went onto your account and re-read The Window and this and I figured it out! It is a dream! I never got that before! The buzzing was the bugs! The dead thing was...him? The rock? Uh...idk. But I finally understand ugh it's so cruel.
Anyway. Where have you been?
| qwencent chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
im guessing it WAS a dream...it was too short and pretty fast paced...and tohru never said i luv u back, and wat was the noise? what haened after that?
| MALEC chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
i got it (i think) this is very clever i loved it
| elliott ashes chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
This is a fascinating piece, and again, very well-written and thought-provoking. My interpretation is basically the same as what Grapes Are Sweet said, that the piece is a dream - some of the descriptions seem rather dream-like, as details are missing, such as what Tohru was eating. Could you let me know if my interpretation is correct, or is your meaning a secret? Either way, you are a very talented author.
| LostOneLawliet chapter 1 . 2/12/2012
Ah, I do believe I've gotten the message. Again, I love it. It even has that touch of amusement through Tohru's character that plays well against Kyo's attitude. It's still well-written even though it is different from the other two... Again, an instant favorite.
| Kyo Kun 4ever chapter 1 . 8/28/2011
the dead thing was the true form of the cat and kyo is no longer cursed when you described the smell i realized that instantly but i have an above average iq so it is probably a lot harder for others
| chiisana-inori chapter 1 . 8/11/2011
I feel like I have to read something happy now; which is just an indication of how good this is. Keep up the excellent work.
| AKIMOTO TSUBAKI chapter 1 . 8/2/2011
WAAAAHHHH! Poor Kyo x2 . If only him and Tohru were reallt together! The way you convey emotions in ur stories is very impressive and really made me get into it. I do wish for Kyo's happiness.
| Grapes Are Sweet chapter 1 . 1/15/2011
Brilliant story, it's great to see something so deep from a fandom that tends to be more shallow.
I'm honestly not entirely sure what to make of it - my first guess is that the entire story -is- a dream (or hallucination, or something of the sort) that Kyo's having while in "The Window". Not sure if that's right, though... I tend to be bad at trying to decipher literature.
Either way, very interesting read, and I'd love to see more from you in the future.
| Angelic Guardian chapter 1 . 10/2/2010
Interesting story. It was well-written, yet at the same time very ambiguous. (I'm assuming that was your intention.)
| x-animecrazy-x chapter 1 . 8/17/2010
yes that was pretty gud whoohoo well done lol
| FadingNoctis chapter 1 . 8/16/2010
Another interesting piece of yours. I feel like the dead animal represents Kyo's true form in some way (with the insects buzzing around and how that related to your "Window" fic). My only theories are that either A: Since Kyo's curse is broken, the true from is dead...? Or B: That will be Kyo's fate (like in "Window").
Another great piece. Keep it up. ;)