Reviews for Moving On and Moving Forward
slc6548 chapter 14 . 10/7/2011
Good chapter.
xXx Tinkies xXx chapter 14 . 10/7/2011
Good chapter! Please continue! _
Kenjo chapter 13 . 8/3/2011
Jasper and a motorbike... Swooon!;P
deltagrl chapter 13 . 6/10/2011
InaV chapter 13 . 6/9/2011
I liked the chapter. And yeah, the motorcycle is sexy ;) Love Jasper on a motorcycle!
slc6548 chapter 13 . 5/31/2011
katandjasper chapter 13 . 5/28/2011
Good Chapter. Can't wait for more.
EJ 12212012 chapter 13 . 5/27/2011
more more more more more! I love it. This story is fuck awesome. I love the Major. I really do, as messed up as that is. You paint that side of him with perfection. I'm excited for an update.
xXx Tinkies xXx chapter 13 . 5/27/2011
Fantastic chapter! Keep up the fabulous work & please continue! _
Ness1956 chapter 13 . 5/26/2011
Love it!
raulie19 chapter 13 . 5/26/2011
Great story:)
Deborah Stone- KarmabalanceDeb chapter 13 . 5/26/2011
I thought it was a good chapter and if it gets you over the hump then even cooler.
mmelody6 chapter 13 . 5/26/2011
cathy29jes chapter 13 . 5/26/2011

Jasper is really in denial, he can not believe that Bella could be his girlfriend ,even though Jacob loves ,something that never got Fuckward , Jasper was surprised Bella him choose a bike , I can understand but Jasper should avoid comparing Bella and Alice because it day and night ,Bella is much cooler and will let him be himself ,it does not change ,excellent chapter,

writersarereaders chapter 13 . 5/25/2011
I loved it.

Jasper is finally getting a clue. I liked the scene at the end with the bike. Jasper/Jackson can ride a bike in front of me anytime. And I have a feeling that Peter and Jake are going to be more than Jasper can handle.

Please post more soon.
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