Reviews for Moving On and Moving Forward
TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 8 . 6/26/2012
Just the fact that Jasper acknowledges that the Major never really spoke up when it came to Alice, but does when it comes to Bella, seems to be a confirmation that Bella is his mate; especially with the Major's comment to Jasper, ''No one hurts MINE!''

Peter is such a sweetheart to be playing matchmaker by giving Jasper the nudges in the necessary directions to help the man become happy with Bella.

Aww, it is so sweet that Bella was comfortable enough with Jasper to fall asleep to his sexy cowboy voice as he read her to sleep.

Well done - keep up the good work.

:)

.-.-. F.Y.I. - ERRORs found needing correction: 1)'"... and with the help of mt best friend got over it ..."' ["mt" ought to be "my"]; 2)''...NO I WILL NOT THINK THE BITCH!'' ["THINK THE BITCH" I believe ought to be "THINK OF THE BITCH"]
TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 7 . 6/26/2012
It was good to see that Jasper was indeed thought of as a family member by some of the Cullens.

It was so sweet the way that Bella communicated with Jasper via sending him various emotions as a means to convey her thoughts and convince him of her sincerity.

Well done - keep up the good work.

:)

.-.-. F.Y.I. - ERRORs found needing correction: 1)'He wasn't breathing either, bit I could see a hint of a smirk.' ["bit" ought to be "but"]; 2)'It dawned on me that he's an empath and could everything I could and I blushed.' ["and could everything I could" ought to be "and could feel everything I could"]
TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 6 . 6/26/2012
I loved Peter's words of advice to Jasper, '"You should be in Forks in a house that has a delectable human female and talking to her and not in Seattle."' ;D

Good story - keep up the good work.

:)

.-.-. F.Y.I. - error found: 'Peter Whitlock, my second in command, my brother, ...' ["second in command" ought to be "second-in-command"]
TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 5 . 6/26/2012
I'm glad that Jasper came clean with Bella about Alice dumping him, and his feelings of unworthiness. These two are good for each other.

I love this pairing.

It is too cool that Jasper wants to stay in touch with Bella, and how much it made her happy to hear so.

Well done - keep up the good work.

:)
TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 4 . 6/26/2012
*::fans face while heart is beating quickly::* OH MY! I love the whole sexually aroused Jasper and Bella mini-Tango that was going on in this chapter. It was like Jasper's instinct was taking over when he smelled Bella's arousal... meaning that his inner beast recognized its mate. Freaking lucky girl! ;D

Well done - keep up the good work.

:)
TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 3 . 6/26/2012
Oh man, what a low blow, poor Jasper, Alice was never good enough for him as evident that she was unable to see past his scars and made feel ashamed of them. He is better off without the wench, however, it is awful that he feels that the Cullens are not his family anymore and that he is now alone in the world - total bummer.

:(
TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 2 . 6/26/2012
M.m.m., yummy bondage with Jasper - lucky Alice! ;D

Well done - keep up the good work.

:)

.-.-. F.Y.I. - error found: 'Never again will you even get a glimpse of the darkness withing me.' ["withing" ought to be "within"]
TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
Good first chapter.

:)
Babysis64 chapter 8 . 6/11/2012
wow so the Major sees Bella as his but not Jasper i didn't think that could happen i thought they were the same as a unit but i guess not they are same people i guess but different in the beast and the man him self oh well from the looks of it Peter is trying to set Bella and Jasper up i think Peter knows that they are true mates i bet he does and he is going to let Jasper figure it out for himself
Babysis64 chapter 5 . 6/11/2012
so Jasper and Bella are going to be friends and hopefully just that because they are not mated or anything no they are not or are they together they are just friends and that is it
Babysis64 chapter 4 . 6/11/2012
so Jasper went back to the Cullen house and Bella was crazy to go there she should of stayed away but being Bella she had to find out who it was and Jasper fell off well to be honest i don't blame him he is hurt by Alice but hopefully he doesn't hurt Bella with his blood lust
Babysis64 chapter 3 . 6/11/2012
Poor Jasper what a way to be left his wife makes love to you and you don't know what is up but you feel happy about your mate then after a wedding he finds a note and wants a divorce not good he is so lost without her now what is he to do
PaulaB87 chapter 18 . 4/25/2012
looking forward to next chapter i hope char and bella got on
Babysis64 chapter 18 . 4/7/2012
hey there this was a good chapter and don't stop writing okay i am enjoying your story. Congrats. to Jackson Rathbone and his girlfriend and how did you know that he had a they have there baby get back i am glad that Bella got to meet Char and Char got to meet Bella I can't believe that Alice at all and all what she is doing just so Jasper doesn't have his mate that is not good at all she needs to be any ways have a good weekend and Happy Easter to you
Babysis64 chapter 15 . 4/7/2012
hey there this was a good chapter and i still wonder who is after Jasper and Bella and now that Peter wants to keep Bella safe also is something that has to be threatening them and l think it is Alice doing it and if it is Alice won't survive it.
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