|Reviews for Breaking Dawn Alternate Ending|
| Kalastra chapter 1 . 5/19/2014
This is a lot more believable then BD
| owlsrawsome chapter 1 . 12/15/2012
I loved that. This was always what I thought should happen. I mean, Kate had centuries of practice and she could only get her power to cover her skin and Bella had a month and could rap it around whoever she wanted even if they were over 50 feet away, like what craziness is that! I love this ending!
| Misslucky1818 chapter 1 . 11/1/2011
OMG! This is utterly AMAZING! You should so be a writer and I am for the next chapter xx
| AB967 chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
Please please write more! Its really intense!
| voldieshorcrux chapter 1 . 3/31/2011
Oh man! I loved this! I always thought someone should have died at the end of BD, but now after reading this I'm not so sure. lol! Great job!
| SonicTeamFreeWill chapter 1 . 2/18/2011
dun dun DUNN OMG you tortured Carlisle! (don't worry, I do too) but at least he's not dead. yet.
poor Bella! the pressure!
| Halfcarrot chapter 1 . 12/18/2010
Really really good!
To be honest, I think that the Edward and Bella were always far to lucky whenever they met with the Volturi. I mean, why would the Volturi let them live?
A brilliant alternative ending.
| TwilightAndJBfan chapter 1 . 8/15/2010
is this the end of your story? i hope to god not! it was very good! i want you to keep writing! :) i know Bella is going to die. lol. well keep writing! :)