Reviews for Joy, Relief, Lust, Gratitude
Guest chapter 1 . 2/28
Beautiful
boymommytotwo chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
this is beautiful. BEAUTIFUL.
Lisa-FanFicCrazy chapter 1 . 10/24/2012
So sweet.. XO
naelany chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
*swoons*
malleelee chapter 1 . 9/22/2011
Incorporating the title into the text was interesting. The Carlisle/Edward pairing is a good match. For some activities of the boys, the drabble concept left me wanting more. Lots more. Quick and enjoyable reading.
lilithaofsherwood chapter 1 . 9/12/2011
That was a beautiful description of what I think everyone hopes for. Great job!
harrytwifan chapter 1 . 6/16/2011
Just lovely.
cecilia4059 chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
Need to leave a review. Nice story and I really enjoy readidng it. Thank you for writing and sharing.
angelchicken chapter 1 . 3/31/2011
Lovely.
minlin chapter 1 . 3/2/2011
Lovely, a good mix of sweetness and sex!
Kats Flower Girls chapter 1 . 12/14/2010
Yummy! Loved all the tenderness mixed in with the rush of a new relationship & the realization of permanence... great drabbles!
deenerneener chapter 1 . 12/7/2010
Loved the creative approach: a twenty-"chapter" one-shot, in drabbles.

It's much harder to write short fiction than long, harder to know just which words to choose to give the impression of what you're trying to convey without the luxury of endless description.

Very well done, and touching, too!

Thanks for sharing this.
Chewie4370 chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
That was excellent to be so short and too the point.

I love it. Excellent skills you have!
FOXY-FEET chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
edward in scrubs. yum.

love the style of writing.

very effective.

well done!
Nisa Cullen chapter 1 . 9/15/2010
So sweet
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