love the story so far please update soon

Oh oh dear, I am so very confused I don't even know where to start. First off, I was under the impression that something exciting was about to happen when she left the hotel. It didn't. And another thing I'm confused on was the random dude she talked about nothing with Nick or just a random dude? This felt very much like a filler chapter, but I'm not sure what it's filling in for. Is she ever going to meet Nick? It seemed like she'd been walking a while how did she end up so close to the hotel. And how will she get in to the room if Mark isn't there. Sorry if this a bit harsh but I'm just very very confused. Please enlighten me.

hey!

another awesome chapter! i hope u update soon! - :)

The end confused the hell out of me, but then I thought about it, and it made sense. I think Chrys is right. If Nick was a dad, he'd have stuck around. I was going to point this out to you, but you took care of that bit OOC-ness. I do hope to see more Alec. I was enthralled, but that may have just been good writing. Chrys is coming along nicely too. She's gorgeously written for an OC. I hope we get some Nicky in the next chapter.

hey!

another awesome chapter! i hope u update soon! - :)

I'm truly enjoying the story but couldn't help asking myself when are you finaly going to introduce Nick personly into it. After reading Rose's diary notes question is why did they break apart?

I'm willing to got the answers so please try to update sooner, ok?

I1m glad you updated. Too bad Nick couldn't be present at dinner but sending Ray to take his place turned out efective here. I'm looking forward to see Nick and Chrys meeting and how they'll manage their relation from that point. Try to update in a short period this time, ok?

Interesting start. Not often done. I'll check for updates.

Ok, well my opinion of Langston has now improved. I still maintain my stance that Ecklie is a jerk. And Nick is very understanding. How old is Chrys exactly? The way she narrates seems to vary a lot.I thought she was like sixteen at first, but then twelve now back to about fourteen. I'm somewhat confused by that. Will we be seeing the rest of the cast here soon?

Well, Leesa, that did throw me for a loop. As always I enjoy your writing style, but may inquire as to why the hell you chose Ray? Why not someone we like? I like the story though. It will shape up quite nicely. I obviously chose this to read since i'm familiar with the characters. I look forward to a long overdue update on this story. Btw, i think it's spelled Nicolas or Nickolas. Just saying,but I don't know how they spell it in canon.

Love it so far, you need to update soon!

That was unexpected, Dr. Ray filling in for Nick. Im not sure if the step dad Mark is a good guy or not. Im curious as to where this story leads, update soon.

awwww it wasnt Nick :( well at least it was ray! hes aweseome! cant wait for the next chapter :)

Unexpected. Ray taking Nick's place? Why. I'm not sure yet if Mark is a good guy or not or if I'd credit his description to Chrys anxiety and worries. Hope you update soon.

I agree is not a new idea but is welcome. After all Nick's in his 40s, when is he going to have a family, same apply to GE. I'd like to see him as a father. Keep coming.