Reviews for Long Way Down
rossales63 chapter 26 . 9/14
I love this story, I wanted to know if you would authorize me to translate it into Portuguese and post it on Wattpadd, I always include all the credits of the original author and the link to the original story too, I feel like there are very few fics about this couple and I would like to share with my readers
evfangirl98 chapter 26 . 8/23
Loved it
Kayozm chapter 18 . 8/7
I loved this chapter too. Charlotte is so much fun.
Kayozm chapter 14 . 8/6
I love how he touches her in a way that could be casual, thoughtless friendship, but could be more. It reminds me of being a teen/young adult hanging out with friends who were boys and the “maybe” feeling before something starts.
Kayozm chapter 13 . 8/6
I love this chapter.
Guest chapter 21 . 6/13
I don't think what Jasper told Bella in Spanish was cheesy. I thought it was incredibly sweet. chapter 26 . 6/11
I hadn't reread this in years and it's still great, thanks again. chapter 25 . 6/10
why in god's name would Edward think Bella i going home with him? he has has had to listen to Bella tell him repeatedly she doesn't want him and doesn't love him. he's to self important and stupid to believe her. maybe she needs to kick his ass! chapter 23 . 6/10
it's a good thing Jasper and Bella love each other so much because Edward i going to be a pain in the ass and try to coerce her to take him back. probably. chapter 19 . 6/10
how the hell does Victoria know that Bella is still alive? nice sexy undressing scene. I would love to see movie Jasper undress, I would count all his weird tattoos as battle scars. chapter 18 . 6/10
so they can talk about boys? I forget sometimes they are stuck being teenagers. chapter 3 . 6/8
the way you write Jasper makes him one of the most interesting people in all of the stories I've read. he has so much more depth of character than Edward, but then he is a man, not a boy playing at being a man. chapter 1 . 6/8
Bella needs to understand that Major Jasper Whitlock is his own man. how he looks at all the angles before he decides what needs to be done and does it. Bella needs to shut up and grow the hell up. Jasper is a man not a boy and he is no coward. when Edward doesn't get what he wants he sulks and then runs.
KimberlyJho-ann chapter 26 . 5/28
It was a great ride. I loved it
KimberlyJho-ann chapter 25 . 5/28
Man, this Victoria has Grace. I permitted myself tear up for her in here.
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