Reviews for Long Way Down
twilightromance4ever chapter 26 . 3/20
oh i loved this! Read it all in a day! Awesomeness!
angelaroberts202 chapter 26 . 3/20
I'm not going to lie. I will always find Human Bella more fascinating than vampire Bella and I tend to stray from stories based around Bella as a vampire for most of the story, but this story was truly an exception. I love it! I'm extremely thankful that you didn't neglect this story as I've seen numerous others do. I'm praying that you have other works I can enjoy.
angelaroberts202 chapter 17 . 3/20
I don't know why but I found Bella to be more annoying in this chapter than any other chapter. It's a shame since this is supposed to be the best chapter so far concerning their relationship. She's just so hypocritical and its so irritating
angelaroberts202 chapter 13 . 3/20
That ending was so cute!
angelaroberts202 chapter 11 . 3/20
Lol aww poor Jasper. I wish I understood Spanish
angelaroberts202 chapter 8 . 3/20
Awww dang it! I hate Bella's stupid shield. It's worse than Edwards mind reading ability! Every jasper/Bella story as soon as she gets turned he can't feel her emotions and can't use his ability on her and it gets freaking annoying especially since it keeps getting brought up in these stories.
angelaroberts202 chapter 7 . 3/20
I'm really shocked that Bella got turned this early in the story. I've seen a lot of stories where Bella only gets turned towards the end, or its mentioned in the epilogue. I'm not sure how I feel about her getting changed so early on in the story because I absolutely hate her shield ability and I hate the dragging on of a newborn learning control and acting crazy for a long time. I like human Bella as far as plot is concerned. This story has proved to be very well written so I'm not too worried that i will be disappointed
angelaroberts202 chapter 4 . 3/20
I wonder if the Cullen's will come back at some point
angelaroberts202 chapter 3 . 3/20
That thing jasper said about watching your own pieces has got me thinking as well.
angelaroberts202 chapter 1 . 3/19
Yay! Such a unique storyline! I'm going to enjoy reading this I can already tell
TheSchuylerSisters3 chapter 21 . 3/18
I aim to be as petty as Jasper
Eihren chapter 7 . 3/9
Firts of all this is a wonderful story I love every part of it. Only a little thing ''he cagado'' is not correct as an expresion in spanish it is ''La he cagado'' if you don't put the LA it only means that he has defecate hehehehe
Emily chapter 26 . 3/6
I loved this. You are a great writer. I could see this story playing out in my head just like a movie. You created beautiful images with your words. Chapter length was great, you stayed true to the character personalities. Your description of Bella's change was very impressive and powerful. I sort of wished there were more lemon scenes, but that's just me. LoL. I'm going to check out your other works. Great job, you have made me want to dive into more B/J fanfiction. I almost can't stand B/E now.
Guest chapter 26 . 2/24
Great story. I love your version of Jasper.
IamJasmineBitch chapter 26 . 2/21
Omg this is the best fic I've ever read on this pairing thank you so much !

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