I love this story, I wanted to know if you would authorize me to translate it into Portuguese and post it on Wattpadd, I always include all the credits of the original author and the link to the original story too, I feel like there are very few fics about this couple and I would like to share with my readers

Loved it

I loved this chapter too. Charlotte is so much fun.

I love how he touches her in a way that could be casual, thoughtless friendship, but could be more. It reminds me of being a teen/young adult hanging out with friends who were boys and the “maybe” feeling before something starts.

I love this chapter.

I don't think what Jasper told Bella in Spanish was cheesy. I thought it was incredibly sweet.

I hadn't reread this in years and it's still great, thanks again.

why in god's name would Edward think Bella i going home with him? he has has had to listen to Bella tell him repeatedly she doesn't want him and doesn't love him. he's to self important and stupid to believe her. maybe she needs to kick his ass!

it's a good thing Jasper and Bella love each other so much because Edward i going to be a pain in the ass and try to coerce her to take him back. probably.

how the hell does Victoria know that Bella is still alive? nice sexy undressing scene. I would love to see movie Jasper undress, I would count all his weird tattoos as battle scars.

so they can talk about boys? I forget sometimes they are stuck being teenagers.

the way you write Jasper makes him one of the most interesting people in all of the stories I've read. he has so much more depth of character than Edward, but then he is a man, not a boy playing at being a man.

Bella needs to understand that Major Jasper Whitlock is his own man. how he looks at all the angles before he decides what needs to be done and does it. Bella needs to shut up and grow the hell up. Jasper is a man not a boy and he is no coward. when Edward doesn't get what he wants he sulks and then runs.

It was a great ride. I loved it

Man, this Victoria has Grace. I permitted myself tear up for her in here.