Reviews for Love Struck
HPJellicleCat chapter 1 . 11/26/2010
So, so, so, so adorable! Very sad, as well.

I really, really liked it.
sheriff stilinski chapter 1 . 10/10/2010
Awww. Remus/Sirius is soo amazing.

I absolutely adore this and it's beautifulbeautifulbeautiful.

Sorry I haven't been reviewing as much as I should be! School's been killing me :/
PenonPaperFingersonKeys chapter 1 . 10/2/2010
This is so sweet I just got a cavity - in a good way.

And it totally is worthy of the 19 (now twenty) reviews, because it's just awesome. I'm not really a fan of slash -even though I don't have a problem with homosexuals (in the contrary, I love them (I think it's awesome (and kickass) how they go against the expectations of society to be themselves)- but I just can't right them! So, congrats to you on a magnificent freeverse and an awesomely unique way of writing it!
in sync chapter 1 . 9/26/2010
Gah. *dies*

This was so heartbreaking and...and..neyah. I can't describe it.

And the last line was just so, so...ohmygod. And it made me want to cry and...and...this was just amazing. Really. And so /Remus/.

BrilliantBrilliantBrilliant.

Mystii
TannaCarien870 chapter 1 . 9/7/2010
That was sweet! Good job with it!
hiddlestons chapter 1 . 9/7/2010
I lovelovelove the last line, "Because he is Sirius Black, And h the world." Amazing. Simply amazing. And this line... "It's hi smile And hi of a laugh. Nicely done. :)

-ESS
hot chocolate mess chapter 1 . 8/27/2010
that is very nice free verse poem.
Charlie'sDragon chapter 1 . 8/25/2010
Amazing- you really captured Remus well. I am so jealous of your freeverse poetry.

And it just looks so pretty too!

Love from,

Charlie
Morghen chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
Awwww, poor Remus!

I love this pairing so much and you did an amazing job at describing their relationship. I liked how Remus wanted more than friendship but didn't want to risk it because he valued their friendship so highly. I also loved the fact that he believed that Sirius deserved so much better than him - it was heartbreaking! Great job!

*favorites*

-Morghen
nadaooooo chapter 1 . 8/21/2010
'Because he is Sirius Black and he deserves the world,'

I loved the whole story, that line especially :D
Inclination chapter 1 . 8/19/2010
Wow. This was very powerful, I love your Remus-voice, it's SO in-character. Wonderful (: I especially love the last two lines, they break my heart.
RedVinesGirl11 chapter 1 . 8/18/2010
ilike it is i a nice litle poem :) you should write more
sidex chapter 1 . 8/17/2010
Aieeeeee, great job! Freeverse never makes sense to me, and as beautiful as this poem was, I don't understand why some words are repeated (hatehatehate) and some words have spaces between the letters so they'r t. Would you mind explaining it to me? :)
HerTaintedQuill chapter 1 . 8/17/2010
:)I liked it...lol
saarraahhxxx chapter 1 . 8/16/2010
Gahh! I lovelovelove FreeVerse & this was awesomeness XD

*favorites*
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