|Reviews for Retrieval|
| Bubble Wrapped Kitty chapter 7 . 9/24/2010
Oh my God, you totally left that open for a sequel!
Whoa, okay, sorry, calming down now. Just had to get that off my chest because that was the first thing that came to my mind when I reached the end. It just felt like there was just enough closure to end this adventure, but there's still that little crack in the door that lends itself to the possibility of more to come. Or maybe that's just wishful thinking on my part, lol.
And what an ending it was! Holy climax, batman! It felt like every time that I thought the action had all ended and they'd be home free, something else would totally implode and there was just more and more until my heart felt like it was going to freaking explode in my chest. Which is totally awesome, by the way.
I like that Annie got to meet Diane, and that Diane has found something good for herself. She was always so adorable on the show, I kind of wondered how she ended up working for a place like NSA. And the dynamic between her and Jake was so sweet and sincere. She deserved to find some sort of happiness. Although I feel bad for all the demons that just got stirred up in Auggie's closet from all of this. Poor guy, like he doesn't have enough to deal with already, lol.
Thank you so much for writing this story, I have loved every second of it.
| MyGoldenGlow chapter 7 . 9/24/2010
Perfect! - as always :)Not that I expected anything different! :)
You have Annie/Auggie interactions down perfectly, and I'm so glad Duarte was a good guy in the end.
Annie visiting Diane at the end was awesome. Sad, but sweet too (I guess bittersweet would be the word I'm looking for :)). I wish Diane could know that Jake didn't dead - or at least, that he only metaphorically died. But I guess that would ruin his secret life :)
I look forward to more fics from you, even though this one is over (*sigh* I'll miss it).
Definitely going into my favorites!
| Whoaa Kayy chapter 7 . 9/24/2010
UGH, NO! I can't believe it's over! It CAN'T be over! Diane needs to see Jake's-Auggie-still alive! Please write a sequel, or an epilogue, or, or-SOMETHING!
Anyhoo. Brilliant ending to a fantastical story. Well done, one of the best. You should seriously make this a cross-over, I bet the Jake 2.0 fans of the FanFiction board would eat this up. :)
| MsJML chapter 7 . 9/23/2010
Beautiful! You wove these two shows and characters together brilliantly :)
| slsilver chapter 7 . 9/21/2010
awww...good story, but i must say...i was hoping Auggie and Annie would end up together.
| Katie 452 chapter 7 . 9/21/2010
I am so sad that this fic is over! I've enjoyed it very much!
| ComicalEpiphanies chapter 7 . 9/21/2010
I can't believe it's over. I get that it was time, but still... I don't want it to be over. I love how you ended it, though. Thank you for not having Jake Foley return, not making it sappy, not making it complicated. It feels finished. I really, really loved it. I was never, not once, disappointed (well, that cliffie wasn't nice). Fabulous job.
| bloodyrose1294 chapter 7 . 9/21/2010
I absolutely loved the ending. Although I do wish there had been Auggie/Annie romance; however, your story clearly states this is friendship, but I love it anyways XD Great job!
| dream-of-belief chapter 7 . 9/21/2010
Well, I'd be lying if I said I wasn't completely crushed that it's over. BUT, even though I'll be missing updates of my favourite story, this was an AMAZING ending. Again, you are SO GOOD with action sequences. I love how everything was tied up. I'd love to see a sequel, but I understand if you aren't up to it. If you ever decide to write anything related to this story though, you can be assured that I will read it vociferously. Great, great job!
| oceanmoon chapter 6 . 9/18/2010
Uh oh, this is not good, I hope Auggie doesn't die! Ahhhh!
| bloodyrose1294 chapter 6 . 9/11/2010
Somehow I find it improbable that this would actually happen in the series, but I love the plot. Its unpredictable and awesome. I really wish there would be Auggie and Annie romance, because I really don't like Ben. At all. Because Auggie is just awesomer than he XD Can't wait for your next update!
| Lady Krystalyn chapter 6 . 9/8/2010
Wow, talk about a cliffie! You're so mean! ;) Duarte's frustration with Annie's mistrust was hilarious in the chapter, definitely served to lighten things up slightly. Can't wait to see what happens next!
| Whoaa Kayy chapter 6 . 9/7/2010
That's all I have to say to you. That, and a wonderfully written chapter. Again. Brava.
NOW UPDATE, OR I'LL COME AFTER YOU WITH A BURNING TOASTER.
THAT'S RIGHT, MISSY. BURNING.
| Gidgeygirl chapter 1 . 9/7/2010
I'm really enjoying this 've got Annie and Auggie down 't wait to read the rest.
| Dramionelover01 chapter 6 . 9/7/2010
alright i cant belive you keep leaving us like i hope Auggie goes bact to his usual self