|Reviews for Retrieval|
| Katie 452 chapter 5 . 8/30/2010
I love this fic. Its seriously like my favorite thing ever!
| jquist chapter 5 . 8/29/2010
Arrrrrrrgh! I didn't see that coming! Double arrrrrgh!
What an intense cliff hangar!
I have no idea how this can work out with the good guys winning.
This will have a good/happy ending right? If not, give a heads up and may the fleas of a thousand camels infest your armpits. If yes, may the good writers muse forever rest over your creativity!
| ComicalEpiphanies chapter 5 . 8/29/2010
NOOO! What happened? What did he do? Where's Auggie/Jake?
| Jennifer chapter 5 . 8/29/2010
No fair! I hate the fact that you ended it here.. with annie unsure of auggie and now auggie in Dumont's hands! Argh!
Okay, personal feelings aside... great cliff hanger. I can't wait to see how they get out of this one. Auggie has really bad timing on the Mercer thing but I can see why he wouldn't want any secrets between them when things are so uncertain and he is already in trouble with Annie.
Why did annie pass out too? feedback from the bug in her brain? or was it something that cripples most systems.
Oooh, looking forward to the next update.
| Dramionelover01 chapter 5 . 8/29/2010
Great chapter.i hope Annie isnt andry with him for too long
| Whoaa Kayy chapter 5 . 8/29/2010
NO AUGGIE! What have you done? And where the hell is Diane? Why is Duarte back? That should be Auggie! Why'd they both pass out? What'd DuMount do to them? Oh I'm so upset right now! Please update soon!
| Emaelin chapter 5 . 8/29/2010
Oooooo plot twist! And a cliffhanger, just to top it all off. Geez. Well, can't wait for chapter 6 so we can find out what the heck is happening to Annie! Hugs and cookies, E
| dream-of-belief chapter 5 . 8/29/2010
I can honestly say that this story is the one I anticipate most anxiously. I am iso/i excited to read more of this. I've said it before, but it made me start watching Jake 2.0 which I am highly grateful for and is now pretty much my only fix now that I've finished watching it. You write everyone so, so well and make me believe that this is completely possible. In fact, I spent the entire time watching Jake 2.0 and thinking what would happen if Jake idid/i become Auggie. I love this story iso/i much and anxiously await every update. I hope that you update soon, because I check my inbox obessively in the futile hope that there will be an update. I thought you did a great job in this chapter of addressing the Jake 2.0 stuff and characterising Annie's reaction. Brilliant job, as always. I can't wait for more!
| Jennifer chapter 4 . 8/28/2010
I love your attention to detail. You never seem to forget and leave a detail hanging. I really love the play between Annie and Duarte! Both characters have their own way of arguing and you have it set! I really like the way you ended this. "I'm still on your side..." (sigh) So cute.
| Katie 452 chapter 4 . 8/28/2010
Holy crap I love this fic. Very happy to have found someone else that loved jake 2.0 (heck, I'm excited to have found someone else who heard of it). This is amazing, I look forward to more!
| Dramionelover01 chapter 4 . 8/27/2010
i loved this dose auggie really love love annie
| oceanmoon chapter 4 . 8/27/2010
Lol, it's amazing how everything was so tense, and yet you made it comfortably comical. I appreciated that!
| oceanmoon chapter 3 . 8/27/2010
Even though this was a completely tense chapter, I found myself laughing at some of it, and the ending left me completely shocked, so I look forward to moving on to the next chapter!
| MyGoldenGlow chapter 4 . 8/26/2010
I tried to resist reading this in the hope that I could cram in an entire season of Jake 2.0 in a few days. :) When that didn't work I decided it wasn't worth the torture of waiting - and I was right!
"Annie's stomach was like the tension equivalent of an all-night rave right now. And one with really shitty music, at that."
Possibly my favorite line! :) I LOVE this story! I can't wait for another chapter, and I'll try my best to catch up on Jake 2.0 by then :)
| Azurite chapter 4 . 8/25/2010
Eek, I don't know squat about Jake 2.0 (well, aside from the fact that it was on the now-gone UPN and also starred Chris Gorman), but this seems to fit so seamlessly with it that I'm astonished. I adore every bit of this, from Annie and Jake!Auggie's banter to the threat of Dumont with Kyle.
What I'm slightly confused about is when Auggie looked up Annie's file...how did Dumont know to look at the CIA personnel servers (and how did he do it?) to find traces of a too-perfect code, sign of nanites? I knew he must have assumed something about Annie to have her lured there and whip out the electromagnet, but how did he find Annie via Auggie, anyway, especially if he thinks "Jake" is dead and Annie's the new nanite girl? Why would SHE leave traces of looking at her own file?
I can't believe Auggie so seamlessly said he loved Annie and she didn't so much as bat an eyelash at it. Of course, she's been through hell and back again, and his tone of voice may not have been "This is a confession of deep love" versus "I'm your best friend and that'll never change," so I don't know-will it get brought up again, by either of them?
I really want to see where this goes!