Reviews for The Serpents' Kiss
BlueWater5 chapter 192 . 5/7
Nice family scene.
BlueWater5 chapter 179 . 5/7
I love the comparison of the baby to a mandrake!
BlueWater5 chapter 173 . 5/7
How could anyone who knew Sirius believe he had betrayed the Potters? When he was a bully and a trouble make for seven years, not to mention a Black? Lucy is completely blind. Did she ever apologize to Snape directly?
BlueWater5 chapter 172 . 5/7
Lucy should have been called out on her anti-Slytherin comment. Dinah doesn't realize she's a hypocrite for believing only a few of the Slytherins are nice; she expects everyone to change but is not flexible herself. Snape changed, but have the others tried to make friends with more Slytherins? Don't they realize the blatant anti-Slytherin feelings openly expressed is causing some of the problems?
BlueWater5 chapter 171 . 5/7
Lucy is totally childish and to take advantage of having a key to move potions around is completely irresponsible. She says she's sorry and won't do it again but her track record shows her word is suspect. Snape would be right to bar her from their rooms. For Sirius to poke fun of Snape via Longbottom's boggart at his own wedding and then to not erase the photo when he said he did just shows that he too is juvenile, which is just pathetic in a 39 year old.
BlueWater5 chapter 138 . 5/6
It would be interesting to see the consensus of the Slytherins.
BlueWater5 chapter 134 . 5/5
Loved the image of Snape flying out the window into the storm!
BlueWater5 chapter 128 . 5/5
Very nice, except for the comment about snakes being connected to Slytherin and implying therefore they and Slytherins were bad.
BlueWater5 chapter 122 . 5/5
Lucy was extremely rude for a guest. She was there as a favor. To mess with Snape's potions was not "cute." She should not be welcomed back and even Dinah should understand why.
BlueWater5 chapter 117 . 5/5
Both Lucy and Sirius are too often immature ... I don't think particularly realistic at times either.
BlueWater5 chapter 116 . 5/5
I doubt the Headmaster would allow Snape to deduct 20 points from Gryffindor without even a pretext. They should have gone into the Room of Requirements to see how it was configured.
BlueWater5 chapter 114 . 5/5
Finally! I'm glad Severus truly realizes he had been obsessive about Lily. I'm also glad the two realize they'll still have disagreements.
BlueWater5 chapter 106 . 5/4
Hence why I liked the movie ending of the Elder Wand.
BlueWater5 chapter 104 . 5/4
Don't the other houses have any problems?
BlueWater5 chapter 91 . 5/4
Dinah very naïve if she believes that just because Sirius loves Lucy that he's a good person, not like his family - can't bad people love select people too? Gee, Sirius is sorry for "other stuff"? When Snape was very particular, it makes you wonder if Sirius is not sorry for some of the bullying he did especially since he didn't mention that until after being almost forced to by Dinah. However, it's nice that they've reconciled. (Interesting that Snape was able to apologize even in his 16 year old body, but Sirius struggles to do so as a full adult ...)
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