Reviews for Moving On
ckk211918 chapter 1 . 1/29/2014
I love it. I was so sad but great. I really did love it. :)
CanadianWriter73 chapter 1 . 3/24/2012
good story. well done.
stevieLUVSAlex chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
There should be more in this catagory... seriously. Well done! D
suns and stars chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
wonderful brought me to tears i watching the moives as we speak and it alwaus made me cry i love your story and hope to see more of stepmom fanfics from you
chez chapter 1 . 2/16/2011
brought tears to my eyes. the way this was written was so real i could hear her talking. the part about bens cape was so so sad. absolutely beautiful. would gladly read more stepmom stories if you were to write some.
buddygirl1004 chapter 1 . 12/8/2010
(thats our real username)

wow really good we just finished watching stepmom for skool we r writing our own story on the stepmom
sallyferrell chapter 1 . 10/28/2010
Very, very good job on this one! Very sad, but moving and touching. You've got a lot of writing talent.
greengirl82 chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
this is a beautiful short story.

seems exactly like it is in the movie.

good job. i was glad at the end of the movie that the family (especially jackie) accepted isabel as one of their own.
Errol's Feather chapter 1 . 8/20/2010
Awww, this story is just so beautiful and sad at the same time. I love how well you captured it all and I can so picture Ben wearing that cape.

And the end with the rose, in a way poetic.

Well done on the writing here sweetie