|Reviews for A Magical Story|
| Matt Bigham chapter 17 . 2/6
Excellent fanfic I love it I look toward to reading your update after your arm is all healed up from the crash.
| TOWTWUKER chapter 17 . 10/26/2013
how is the break?
T/L ur car?
| Ranmaleopard chapter 17 . 10/19/2013
This is god damned awesome I can't wait to see what happens next. Please continue!
| harryharem chapter 17 . 8/17/2013
I like ur story r u even going to finish it
| Regin chapter 16 . 3/16/2013
I Love, I Like, I Lust!Please Update Soon!
| Olaf74 chapter 16 . 10/17/2012
PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE CONTINUE IT!
| misteryman526 chapter 16 . 7/31/2012
Urg, I thought Anakin's romance was kind of creepy in the movie, but this takes him over into whacko stalker territory! I could understand a bit of envious behavior towards Harry but I don't see how he could come up with the idea that Padme would welcome his advances. I mean Harry was sleeping with Padme back on Coruscant and Anakin had to know it, right? Unless Palpatine has managed to plant the idea in his head for some bizarre Sith reason, I just can't believe this. I would have thought that having a more experienced Master like Qui-Gon instead of Obi-Wan would have made more of a difference in Anakin's behavior.
| misteryman526 chapter 11 . 7/31/2012
I think the addition of the Michael character failed to really add anything to your story. I first thought that you were going to use him to reveal some of Harry's life between his arrival and the current action but it was really just filler. If you get back to writing this, I think you should consider either cutting Michael out entirely or use his character as a focus for more flashbacks to Harry's life after leaving Master Yoda's training.
| misteryman526 chapter 4 . 7/31/2012
Pretty good story so far, but I find the bit about Harry's lightsaber a bit strange. Why would it be illegal for a non-Jedi to make a lightsaber, but okay for him to carry one around? Lightsaber aren't really the most dangerous weapons available and I've never really seen anything to indicate that there were many laws restricting weapons in the Republic since practically everybody seems to be armed.
| Shadowhunter536 chapter 17 . 7/30/2012
great story. well written and combines both worlds well. wish it would be continued. hope you healed well from your injuries.
| starboy454 chapter 12 . 7/24/2012
excellent chapter just rereading your story and wondering if you'll ever update it
| LQ360MWJ chapter 17 . 7/10/2012
hope you recover soon
| getlostD91 chapter 17 . 6/5/2012
hey good story so far its a pity you had to stop do plan to continue it at some point in the future
| IMAN2688 chapter 17 . 5/19/2012
Just checking in to see how you are doing after your crash. Hope your doing well. Anyway i just read thru A Magical Story again, and no matter how many times i read it i find myself hoping the next chapter continues this fic. You truly found something amazing with a Harry/Padme pairing. I hope you have a few more chapters done and ready to be posted.
| Niwaki chapter 17 . 4/14/2012
this story is great it's rare I find a star wars story I like but you managed it please continue soon and I wish you a speedy recovery