|Reviews for Sins of the Fathers|
| Peonywinx chapter 1 . 7/3
At certain points, Azulon, Iroh, and Lu Ten all say things that sound too colloquial or overly casual for their characterizations - but that's the only thing that detracts from the immersion of this otherwise wonderful piece. Having Lu Ten and Ozai being so close in age and both competing for Ursa - that's a twist, but it's fitting with this messed up family. Imagine if Zuko actually was Lu Ten's and Azula was Ozai's - Azula would be both Zuko's half-sister AND cousin once removed. It's making me almost wish that was actually the case - Zuko would then truly be the rightful Firelord, being the grandson of Azulon's intended heir (Iroh).
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/23/2018
Actually azulon was only born that year
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/5/2018
Lu Ten x Ursa...no just no.
| Mandarin Fiend chapter 1 . 4/29/2017
I love what you did with the Ozai-Azulon confrontation! Really clever and more realistic having Azulon order Zuko killed as a test, then be horrified that Ozai actually wants to go through will it.
I felt sorry for poor Azula too.
| Convenient Alias chapter 1 . 12/29/2014
I love this theory on what happened that night when Azulon asked Ozai to kill Zuko. That order always did seem a little too twisted to be real to me-especially since it seemed Azulon was doing it to prove a point.
And comparing Ozai to a kid with his hand in the cookie jar was hilarious.
| The Animanga Girl chapter 1 . 3/22/2013
Recommended from tvtropes, it was worth every word ;)
| Liliana Fae chapter 1 . 1/11/2013
That was amazing. You show considerable talent. I consider this to be in my headcannon.
| DisneyPrincess chapter 1 . 10/19/2012
This was just...AMAZING! Secretly I had always believed that Azulon ordering Ozai to kill Zuko WAS just a test to see how he would react rather than an actual order. And having Lu Ten and Ursa be old flames (no pun intended) seemed genius to me. Brilliantly done!
| lord Martiya chapter 1 . 4/21/2012
A haunting story. But wonderful. I liked it.
| Kaeso Corvinus chapter 1 . 2/12/2012
Very nice story, I really think these are believable directions for the characters and would explain a lot.
And it never hurts to have more fics were Lu Ten and Azulon get time.
| Soten-ni-zase chapter 1 . 1/8/2012
This was very interesting and on the part of the private being Jeong Jeong, I don't see that working, now the private being lieutenant Jee...
| PeaceHeather chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
Thank you for writing this. I have now officially added your version of events to my headcanon. This now, as far as I'm concerned, How It All Happened back before the show started.
| Mchan chapter 1 . 9/25/2011
Just wanted to say that i think making that private Jeong-Jeong makes sense, and doesn't seem all that contrived- after all, he needed to begin his mental journey somewhere.
| Severussnapeismybff chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
i think you did really well. i like to imagine this is howit was... i mean, it seems like ozai was the only really messed up one ( mean, really sick and twisted) , until azula. i like this very much, you did a wonderful job. i'm kinda glad that Ozai got firelord...i mean, we wouldn't even have the show if iroh had, right, iroh would have made it all better.
| Yami Vizzini chapter 1 . 2/22/2011
I never gave much thought to how Sozin must have felt after he burned all the Air Nomads, and for naught.
It's also interesting how you give Ozai a possible explanation for his own issues and still make him the least sympathetic of characters! And Lu Ten and Ursa... well, there's a whole other can of worms.