Reviews for Sins of the Fathers |
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![]() ![]() ![]() At certain points, Azulon, Iroh, and Lu Ten all say things that sound too colloquial or overly casual for their characterizations - but that's the only thing that detracts from the immersion of this otherwise wonderful piece. Having Lu Ten and Ozai being so close in age and both competing for Ursa - that's a twist, but it's fitting with this messed up family. Imagine if Zuko actually was Lu Ten's and Azula was Ozai's - Azula would be both Zuko's half-sister AND cousin once removed. It's making me almost wish that was actually the case - Zuko would then truly be the rightful Firelord, being the grandson of Azulon's intended heir (Iroh). |
![]() ![]() Actually azulon was only born that year |
![]() ![]() Lu Ten x Ursa...no just no. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love what you did with the Ozai-Azulon confrontation! Really clever and more realistic having Azulon order Zuko killed as a test, then be horrified that Ozai actually wants to go through will it. I felt sorry for poor Azula too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this theory on what happened that night when Azulon asked Ozai to kill Zuko. That order always did seem a little too twisted to be real to me-especially since it seemed Azulon was doing it to prove a point. And comparing Ozai to a kid with his hand in the cookie jar was hilarious. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Recommended from tvtropes, it was worth every word ;) |
![]() ![]() That was amazing. You show considerable talent. I consider this to be in my headcannon. |
![]() ![]() This was just...AMAZING! Secretly I had always believed that Azulon ordering Ozai to kill Zuko WAS just a test to see how he would react rather than an actual order. And having Lu Ten and Ursa be old flames (no pun intended) seemed genius to me. Brilliantly done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A haunting story. But wonderful. I liked it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice story, I really think these are believable directions for the characters and would explain a lot. And it never hurts to have more fics were Lu Ten and Azulon get time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was very interesting and on the part of the private being Jeong Jeong, I don't see that working, now the private being lieutenant Jee... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for writing this. I have now officially added your version of events to my headcanon. This now, as far as I'm concerned, How It All Happened back before the show started. Well done! |
![]() ![]() Just wanted to say that i think making that private Jeong-Jeong makes sense, and doesn't seem all that contrived- after all, he needed to begin his mental journey somewhere. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i think you did really well. i like to imagine this is howit was... i mean, it seems like ozai was the only really messed up one ( mean, really sick and twisted) , until azula. i like this very much, you did a wonderful job. i'm kinda glad that Ozai got firelord...i mean, we wouldn't even have the show if iroh had, right, iroh would have made it all better. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. I never gave much thought to how Sozin must have felt after he burned all the Air Nomads, and for naught. It's also interesting how you give Ozai a possible explanation for his own issues and still make him the least sympathetic of characters! And Lu Ten and Ursa... well, there's a whole other can of worms. Amazing! |