Reviews for Love Never Dies
Snowdrop65 chapter 2 . 6/23
Torturung... I dont think that theyre allowed to do that in prison. I get it, Stormcage is on Earth, 51st century... but still? And besides, they still use pounds in 51st century! You expect me to believe that?
Great chapter - nothing like a little weakness, just for a moment.
Snowdrop65 chapter 1 . 6/23
Oh no... I am shivering. OMG
snowdrop65 chapter 8 . 6/3
This was awesome! And my suggestion is to leave the anti-climatic annoyance of an ending, so that we could imagine what happened next. There's nothing better than imagining an ending...
rosexknight chapter 8 . 8/24/2010
Grrr...I feel so bad for him! T-T That has to be hard for him. Making that kind of decision...poor Doctor
PrettyPinkOrchard chapter 8 . 8/24/2010
He needs to save her :) there made for each other. Love this story xxx
rosexknight chapter 7 . 8/23/2010
Awww! Cmon you can't leave it at that! I was all into it too! Pleeeaaase update soon! D
PrettyPinkOrchard chapter 7 . 8/23/2010
Please update soon :) x
rosexknight chapter 5 . 8/18/2010
Yay! Go Doctor and the epic screwdriver! This, Black Star Gang, is why you never EVER diss the sonic. Hahaha!
PrettyPinkOrchard chapter 6 . 8/18/2010
Another epic chapter ;) x
ParisNeverEnded chapter 5 . 8/18/2010
Aww another create chapter!
PrettyPinkOrchard chapter 5 . 8/18/2010
Omg I love this story! I'm doing this thing in my drabble where if I like a story I add a chapter for that author and put a link to there story/stories. I'm adding a few chapters on Thursday, let me know if its okay for me to add a link to this story because people neeeeeeed to read this :) xxx
rosexknight chapter 4 . 8/17/2010
Omg omg sooooo epic! Please update soon!
rosexknight chapter 3 . 8/17/2010
Omg I bet the Doc is driving himself crazy with all this thinking XD I can't wait to see! D
JJ chapter 4 . 8/17/2010
There are some really good ideas in this story. The Doctor is very in character and so is River.

You could do with a beta though. The story feels a bit rushed and there are quite a few mistakes. I normally wouldn't bother commenting but I think you have the potential to become a much better writer.

Keep up the good work!
rosexknight chapter 2 . 8/17/2010
Brilliant my friend! Simply brilliant! Totally gripping! D
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