Reviews for Only The Beginning
Cams chapter 1 . 7/11/2014
Hi, I didn't actually read this whole fic. I only got halfway through. I feel like I should tell you why I stopped. You write very well but the content is frustrating. You went over a lot of the events of the first season, often with literal quotes, and it was completely unnecessary. The entire first half of this fic could have been deleted without losing a single sentence of originality. If I wanted to revisit canon, I would have watched the show again. Everyone reading this knows what happened leading up to the pool incident. Even the added "information" from seeing it from John's relatively bland/unbiased point of view is not worth the time it took to read the 3000 words you used to describe it. You DO write really well but I would like a lot more story and a lot less backstory.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/2/2014
I liked it. Kept my attention for the whole thing. Not boring. Well written. Wished it was longer.
Dark Angel's Blue Fire chapter 1 . 2/16/2014
Loved it thanks for sharing x x
sybil branson jr chapter 1 . 1/3/2014
Sooooooooo cute! Omg the ending! (And I shall insert my previous comment from the other version of this here) once again, spectacular job! And totally in character. Props to you and great job :D
Raxicoricofallapatorious chapter 1 . 10/5/2013
This is beautiful. I love it. And I cannot wait to read more of what you have. :3 Thank you for writing this. Thank you so much.

alleygirl24 chapter 1 . 8/24/2013
Beautiful, amazing, heartwarming, and oh-so-steamy!
ZenyZootSuit chapter 1 . 8/16/2013
Wonderful! Love it!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/13/2013
awwwww omg thats amazing!
TheMadKatter13 chapter 1 . 6/2/2013
Cute. Enjoyable. Nice companion piece.
Dr.B.Damned chapter 1 . 5/6/2013
Loved it!
Kotori-Sensei chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
Hi there! I'm did the seach: TV ShowSherlockRomanceCharacter s Sherlock and John...then i went to the last page, and there was your fic!
Very nice! Sexy, cute... of course the fact that you are working with this amazing couple helps a lot! Love them!
I'm going to read the "companion" fic you metion at the beginning...
ExDee LessThanThree chapter 1 . 3/18/2013
I would much rather have had the second season start off this way. They are just so blatantly perfect for each other, it's frustrating seeing them on-screen and NOT boning. Hell, the writers even keep hinting at it with everyone assuming they're together, they should just make that a thing. I know it would take the series too far from original canon, but a guy can dream. /sigh

Seriously, though, this was amazing.
FunkyColdMedina chapter 1 . 3/14/2013
"flashing Sherlock a slightly sheepish smile," say THAT five times fast (I can't even get through it once o.0)
ShoutingThroughStitchedLips chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
*eep* This is AMAZING. You're amazing. You wonderful genius, you. :) Keep up the good work!
let's kill tonite chapter 1 . 8/30/2012
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