|Reviews for Gooseberry|
| LKV chapter 3 . 4/26/2012
ok, the thing about ripping his arm off is kinda awkward... js.
| XXBobBobBobBobXX chapter 3 . 1/17/2012
I've always wanted to read a fic where Bella got the courage to hug Jasper and here it is! I love it, good job! Keep writing 8D!
| KeJae chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
I also love Jasper/Bella both as friends and as brother/sister. Some general storylines that rumble through my brain from time to time...
something happens (at a school function or something where others are around but not the cullens cept jazz of course) and bella is afraid so jasper comforts and protects her (em could be there and bella could fall asleep between them while they watch over her)...
bella is in town and someone from her past (a bully from poheonix?) is making fun of her hitting her lowest self esteem issues. Jasper, on an errand, hears and comes to her rescue. He tells her how he feels about her (brother/sister/friends way) as he walks with her (down the street or something).
there could be some kind of confrontation in forks (with kids and parents around to see) where Jasper ends up fighting someone to prevent bloodshed and he also ends up revealing humanized versions of the family's true pasts. see how the residents of forks would reactand bella could help comfort and protect jazz as he puts so much of himself in the open.
Bella gets hurt and sees halucinations from time to time...Jasper hangs around her to help calm her down when they get to be scary or just to much for her. Between them they talk about them so can better help her, he also talks about his past and they bond through it all.
if you like these im sure i can come up with more anytime:) ps i would love to get to read one of my ideas from some elses view (im a reader not a writer) and i really need to check on my account here and see whats going there...
| books of fantisy15 chapter 3 . 4/17/2011
I like it for havin writers block its good ud soon can't wait to c wat happens!
| BleedingMusic chapter 3 . 4/9/2011
You... are... a... god! PLEASE CONTINUE THIS... UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE MASS UPDATE!
A Faithful Reader
| Miss Colleen chapter 3 . 1/16/2011
very very good. in the next chapter, when they come back you should have bella want to talk to jasper alone about the mean things edward said while he was gone. but keep it goin!
| ArchangelicSlayer chapter 3 . 1/2/2011
It was awesome. I love the Bella-Jasper/sister-brother bond thing, especially as strong as what you've created here! I'm a little confused at the end though.
| gemma loves edward chapter 2 . 8/27/2010
| Property of Jasper chapter 2 . 8/27/2010
i really like this story, it's different to others i've read and also interesting to see how jasper and the wolves tolerate each other, looking forward to reading the final chapter
| PaleChikO.o chapter 2 . 8/27/2010
I love ur style of writing too! I'm not really into the long paragraphs of description nor simple dialouge. Urs is perfect for me! Keep up the good work-ha! I sound like a teacher. :P
| emma chapter 1 . 8/18/2010
i realy wanna find out what happens plz write another chapter
| ak chapter 1 . 8/17/2010
Funny. Thanks for writing.
| PaleChikO.o chapter 1 . 8/17/2010
AMAZING! I loved it! Are you planning on adding a chapter? OR is this just a one-shot? Either way Awseome Job!
ps: I hope you could R&R my stories someday!(: