Reviews for A Little Swim
genesicgaogaigarvsgodgundam chapter 1 . 5/31/2015
cool
Guest chapter 1 . 4/26/2015
Put pictures in this one. I loved it
RTxK chapter 1 . 7/6/2013
I love the details and description of the story I felt like I was naruto
JWA800 chapter 1 . 10/18/2012
Dear Raptorcloak: I'm glad you like my idea of continuing The Naruto and Samui Series! Your awesome you're gonna do great! I can feel it! Their son can grow up and be as strong as his mom and dad maybe more lemons! for Naruto and Samui to have more kids make them one big happy family you know! Anyway do your best! Love, your biggest fan JWA800! aka Jordon! P.S. The Naruto and Samui Series FREAKING RULES! YO! AND AS NARUTO WOULD SAY BELIEVE IT!
ScarletVirus33 chapter 1 . 7/27/2012
I was looking for story all over this site wondering where in the world it went to. Now that I found it and read it again it was so worth the search I undertook to find it. A little thin on the plot but with a hot ass lemon involving the busty babe of Kumogakure and everyone's favorrite knucklehead it's an oversight that's not really worth groaning about. Samui is a character (alongside Anko the snake goddess) that I wish got more love in the anime and the manga but thanks to authors like Raptorcloak these can get the spotlight they so rightly deserve. Now if I can find a Temari x Tenten lemon that has the same intensity as this fic then I'll be happier than a pig in (bleep). Peace out!
dragolf chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
this is defiantly not t rated
Xivitai chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
It's me or there are T rating on lemon?
El Frijolero chapter 1 . 2/19/2012
Nice story really like it
mindmaster123 chapter 1 . 12/29/2011
Good job dude, you should make more SamuixNaruto romance fanfics ;)
Sandaime Hokage chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
Cool fic,

Peace Out

Sandaime Hokage
Imaginary world 3101 chapter 1 . 12/4/2011
I always find Naruto-cloud nin pair interesting. Whether it is Yugito, Samui or Karui, i always liked it.
Kage Bijuu chapter 1 . 10/19/2011
This is a very interesting lemon but I just need to let you know Samui not blonde she actually has lime-green hair I believe.
bankai777 chapter 2 . 3/24/2011
you could always try a naruto/samui and yugito pair.i bet that even the pervy sage jiraiya would be another threesome it could be naruto/temari and ino.
Guardian 777 chapter 2 . 3/22/2011
huminahuminahuminahumina
Heliosion chapter 2 . 3/22/2011
It reads like a porn movie script and not in a good way man _ I was hoping for a tad more plot, less cheesy lines and more intimacy
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