Reviews for Hide and Seek: An Alternate Take
Jean chapter 1 . 9/15/2013
Well... that escalated quickly, LOL.
Adriana chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
Stupid/ but slightly cool.
Faikara chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
lol. my favorte part was when Edward walked in to see James and Bella. Too funny!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
Is it wrong that this made me laugh so hard I cried a bit, I loved the fact that the supposedly "bad guy" was actually bad and had at least two braincells xxx XD
LionshadeSC chapter 1 . 2/10/2012
o.m.g. the last sentence broke me to pieces. that was hilarious! XD i think an author needs to have joke fanfics every once in a while to get it out of their system and just relax for a second. :3 i was about halfway through this when i broke out in to laughter. this was genius! pure genius! XD i applaud you.

lol poor jasper and Emmett. i actually like them . . . XD
BloodyRosie chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
this really is a joke fic

a flame thower?

i couldn't stop laughing

oh my

bella was too funny in this

my face turned red

smile
JudgedPanda chapter 1 . 11/21/2011
Ya James show 'em who's boss! Loved the ending poor Emmet and Jasper though they weren't emo like Edward. Still a flamethrower?, nice touch HAHA!
KittyNinjaAuthor chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
THis should have been the ending for twilight! :)
Miss Cullen -I wish chapter 1 . 6/4/2011
EPIC WIN!

(Ignore the pen name, it's very old)
xSerenityIsn'tAlwaystheAnswerx chapter 1 . 4/3/2011
WTF. HER VOCAL CHORDS? JESUS CHRIST!
XAngelofMercyX09 chapter 1 . 3/16/2011
WOW! well I am a "TwiHard" but I thought that it was funny in a strange sort of way. It definatly did not end the way I thought that it would. I thouht that James would have had his way with Bella(and vice versa) before he killed her, but oh well it was good.
vampireweekday chapter 1 . 3/2/2011
i kind of dig james winning at the end mwahaha ;)
ALittlePieceOfCherryPie chapter 1 . 12/18/2010
Ahahaha...wow...I...don't know what to say. I'm laughing my head off here. That was just so random!

Don't worry, I'm not offended. I'm not that big a fan of Edward or Bella anyway

:P

I loved this, bahahahahahahaha!
Missy789 chapter 1 . 12/9/2010
Very amusing.
angel04une chapter 1 . 10/13/2010
Um wow a flamethrower? Nice one shot
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