|Reviews for Bring On The Wonder|
| BellaVeyron chapter 60 . 2/12
You are a truly amazing and talented writer and should consider getting published. This is my second/third tie reading this story and every time it touches my heart. It is definitely one of my favorites :) Amazing job with this story!
| Sooz88 chapter 1 . 1/8
So far So good xx Thx for sharing
| ktut chapter 60 . 12/17/2013
Beautiful story. I was addicted and really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing!
| Guest chapter 58 . 12/13/2013
So, I'm not sure what to think about everybody's reaction to Edward leaving. Perhaps, they didn't need to "break up." And Bella certainly has every right to feel hurt about it. However, I don't blame him for needing a break. His life was completely upside down. He had unconditionally supported Bella through everything, but she wasn't even trying to be aware of his needs - taking but not giving. Why is Edward getting all of the blame? And based on this chapter, Bella still hasn't really indicated that she truly recognized her part in the break up. Other than to say she knows she wasn't there for him and just matter-of-factly telling of his challenges. No move to make amends or indicate her support - only to blame. It leaves me still reading an imbalance in their relationship. The me, me, me continues. I just wish we would have heard from Bella's POV that she was doing more to improve their relationship. Instead, I'm just left feeling annoyed. Up until this chapter, I really liked this Bella, even with all of her flaws. What bothers me even more is that you indicated that his family "blames" him too or at least gives him attitude about it. That is really irksome.
| Guest chapter 45 . 12/11/2013
I'm sure it will be elaborated on in the next chapter. However, I'll go on record saying that I don't think Edward did anything wrong by Googling Aro. One, he kind of has a right to know as far as his safety is concerned. And Bella isn't exactly forthcoming. Second, Google is ubiquitous and used as a search tool for every subject imaginable. He has as much right to it as anybody else. It's not like he went through Bella's diary. I use Google for research and/or to look things up at least 10 times a day. Bella didn't really have a right to ask Edward not to look him up. Actually, there really doesn't seem like there is a logical reason for her to request it in the first place. Putting aside that Bella is not logical on a regular basis. Still love the story though.
| IAmMelissa2 chapter 40 . 12/10/2013
There is absolutely no excuse for Carlisle's behavior. He's a hypocrite and a bully. He doesn't deserve to be a deacon if he can't even honor this ... "Judge not, that ye be not judged. For with what judgment ye judge, ye shall be judged: and with what measure ye mete, it shall be measured to you." How can he possibly guide others if he can't handle/follow the basic tenets. Ha! Before I even read your A/N, that was the EXACT suit I pictured Edward in. :)
| IAmMelissa2 chapter 21 . 12/8/2013
I'm not Catholic, so I'm not sure about this ... but is it common (and right) for a priest to be so harsh? Guiding, encouraging and structuring, yes. But harsh, judgmental and rude? And don't get me started on Carlisle. Ultimately, this is Edward's decision; one he has to be sure about within himself and with God. His family and others can't make a decision for him. Nor should they try. Although I question the characters, you handle the drama very well. When dealing with sensitive subject matter, it is impressive that an author can present opinions and feelings of the characters without seeming to be pushing their own. Thank you for being that type of author and for your story.
| Guest chapter 20 . 12/8/2013
I am always pleased when people don't like the name Renesmee (or the character Jacob). I like this story even more than I already did! :)
| Guest chapter 16 . 12/8/2013
I don't care how jovial he is; Emmett is a total asshole.
| Guest chapter 62 . 12/7/2013
Your story was amazing. I'm not one to ever leave a review but your story definitely warrants one. Your story was so much more realistic then most I've read, and you could definitely feel everything the characters were feeling. Even though it was mostly in Bella/Edward POV you still got a real feel for the other characters personalities. It was a relief to finally come across a story that wasn't typical Edward is the bad boy with hundreds of sex partners full of problems, and pure innocent Bella comes in and saves the day. You kept the characters true to themselves throughout! Really good read.
| ForeverLobsters chapter 60 . 9/30/2013
So very, very good. This is a long story but so worth the read. It pulled me in and kept me in the story.
| GraceisDee chapter 62 . 9/28/2013
Absolutely love this story. I liked that it progressed slowly. Absolutely adore Priestward.
| moonrae6 chapter 1 . 9/6/2013
Damn, that was good. You should consider changing the character names and getting this published, you're an awesome writer.
| SopranoandBass chapter 60 . 8/22/2013
Great story! A very optimistic ending! I love how the epilogue took us back to the beginning of their tale.
There have been many stories of redeemed prostitutes over the last couple thousand years. It is actually a very often visited Christian motif. So good for you for continuing this great tradition and doing it so well! I am looking forward to reading the outtakes.
| Guest chapter 60 . 8/13/2013
Loved this story!