Reviews for The Witch Twins
Lies of a Silver Tongue chapter 2 . 7/8/2014
I love the story so far! However, though in sure you have a reason for it, Jane and Alec turned at around 11-13 years of age.
mindeity chapter 48 . 6/4/2014
Hi! Here you have an american latin writing. I read the whole fic, and no offense, but I wanna kill you! Jezz. You have to update, i'm excited. I'm sad because of Jane; her life is a shit. I mean, lo ini a man for some years and watch him with other women have to be hard.

I want to see Jane's happiness. I want to Aro to loves her, because idk, I love that couple and there's not so many fics about them. I know that Aro rape Alice and those things, but I hate her. She's annoying in this fanfiction. And Jane es so lovely as nanny, y thought that Alice would love her son.

Sebastian dead? Oh, fuck. I imagined Jane crying if she have the capacity to cry. I fall in love with that baby, dont care if he only appears in two chapters. I love the relation mom-son between Sebastian and Jane.

I wanna see (or read) a scene between Jane and Aro, kisses, or something. I was waiting for it for thirty chapters or more. I want it. And I want to read a mommy Jane «3 is cute.

Bye, bye.
Guest chapter 48 . 6/4/2014
DCT Won't Forget You Now chapter 48 . 4/15/2014
Wow I want more please lol it's soooo good I love your writing
DCT Won't Forget You Now chapter 29 . 4/15/2014
I love it I've stayed up a few hour reading this
Eurisse chapter 48 . 1/16/2014
Such a short chapter this is :( You had me wishing for more.

Also, please don't kill Sebastian, if you will then Aro will have to mate with someone else (or prolly Alice) again to bear a child and Jane has to go through the same hell process again... It's just so heartbreaking... *cries

Would it be possible if Aro gets mad at Jane for being "careless" (because she fails to report this to him as fast as it was actually necessary) and Jane gets fed up and just give up and Aro realizes Jane's worth? (not as a servant or what). Anyways, I'll be hoping to read for another chapter soon xD

thank you.
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 48 . 1/15/2014
Ohh... it would not be good for Alice if her son died. This will certainly be an interesting situation. I wonder if Aro would blame it on her for some reason or another. I can't wait to see how things go!
Keep up the amazing work! :)
Tarah xXx
Jofrench22 chapter 48 . 1/15/2014
I can understand why she doesn't love her son. I hope that alice can get out of this nightmare. This is not love, this is an abusive obsession. Seriously, i hope that she escapes or try to kill herself why not? If she's enough desperate and i think she is. If sebastian dies, will she mourn him? I can't wait to see the reaction of aro if she doesn't seem sad about their son's death. And he wants her to have other children, like a brood mare? The horror! I really hope she gets out of this situation. Please UPDATE SOON! Bye!
Little Miss Volturi chapter 48 . 1/14/2014
Aww they can't lose Sebastian! Please no! God please update soon, I gotta know what happens! Great chapter btw, I love that Jane found someone, even if it's baby and that Jacob/Renesmee imprint thing usually grosses me out, but in this it's okay. I hope Jane isn't getting too soft now though lol.
Please update soon!
Eurisse chapter 47 . 1/2/2014
I just couldn't finish it all. It's so heart breaking and it's insane how in 47 chapters Aro just couldn't reciprocate what Jane feels towards him. It's maddening and I just couldn't find it in me to tolerate such length without further development going on. The story is really well-written, yes, with no flaws, yes... but it takes more than just that to make everything exciting and for readers to have faith on the story, plus it's getting long... when do you, dearest Author, plan to give Jane her happiness?

I do wish that you'll update soon though and please make Aro fall in love with Jane faster *cries. There's only so FEW of good stories for Aro and Jane and it would be such a waste to lose one like yours :)
Little Miss Volturi chapter 47 . 1/1/2014
Great chapter! Does Jane want to be the baby's mother or is it like that vampire soul mate thing? Whichever it is, it's gonna be interesting! I hope Alice learns about Jane's powers sometime and everyone else's so that she realizes why people are so afraid of them. I can't wait for the next update, I hope it's soon!
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 47 . 12/21/2013
Wow. That was intense. Good for Jane though. I feel as if this will work out better for her than she's expecting. Maybe.
Keep up the amazing work! :)
Tarah xXx
WeAllFloatDownHere chapter 46 . 12/10/2013
I like Diana and Sebastian x
Guest chapter 46 . 12/3/2013
Little girl named Regina!
Guest chapter 45 . 12/2/2013
C'mon update!
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