|Reviews for Trains|
| DattebayoUrie01 chapter 1 . 12/7/2011
Ah... subtle seduction. xD
R&R if you will - s/4608424/1/Koibito
| xoxInnerHollowxox chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
Awwwww this was really sweet!
Nice work :D
| KimPerve chapter 1 . 10/26/2010
Awwww! That's sweet... in a way.
What a stubborn Ciel! Everyone can be a bit masochistic! X3
And nice vocabulary!
| flick knife chapter 1 . 8/18/2010
The characters were fantastically portrayed, almost completely accurately. I only say almost coz I figure that the only one who can get them perfect is the creator of said characters. but still, good characters are always good in any story, which you got right in their actions and words.
The general story, however, seemed to lack something. There was a great deal of floweryness and adjectives to describe what was going on, but not much actually went on... I'm going to assume this was probably a scene in your head that you thought to write down? But it would have been better if it didn't seem to stop so abruptly, I think.
It seemed like a lot of lead up, I expected something to happen, then suddenly it ended, quite abruptly for the amount of build up there was.
And hush if you say there's more crit than compliment. It just takes me more words to explain myself with crit.
| sky chapter 1 . 8/18/2010
Nice story! I loved it! Both Sebby and Ciel were very much in character! Please do write more stories like this one!
| kc creation chapter 1 . 8/17/2010
Wow, this was really, really good!
Your Ciel and Sebastian are a little kinky, aren't they? (ahaha)
Ah, Ciel needs to learn some respect and stop putting his feet on people~