|Reviews for The Serpent King's Influence|
| Xaldin007 chapter 20 . 8/21/2010
Well it doesn't really seem like you need much commenting from me, you seem to have this down pat. Though I was never much one for haikus (or poems period :P) you've done pretty well. :) I like how you focus on one person at a time as well. But I'm curious about how you'll end it, since there are multiple battles against Orochi. Could be quite conflicting, and I'm interested to see how it turns out.
The snake has proven,
That power and miracles,
Do not come from gods.
I really like this line, though seeing it alone feels like it's taken out of context. It kinda foreshadows the humans going total Rambo on Orochi. :P
Also, I eagerly await Yoshimoto and Yuan Shao's chapters. XD
| runickenaz chapter 7 . 8/18/2010
After reading this chapter, your haikus are inspiring and keeps me interested in awaiting the next batch.
Keep up the creativity