Reviews for Pieces of the Heart |
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![]() ![]() ![]() how did adrian get so much blood so quickly, more updates please loving it |
![]() ![]() ![]() more updates please love it |
![]() ![]() Absolutely ridiculous if there had been one hundred thousand Strigoi when she left there wouldn't be anyway humans wouldn'tknow about them because there would be so many deaths it couldn't be hidden. Then to have her kill fifty thousand in three years, that would be 45.6 Strigoi a day, about 2 per hour. Not possible. Even in a story like this you need a certain amount of realism for it to be plausible and you just don't have it. |
![]() ![]() Dhampir isn't capitalized |
![]() ![]() ![]() You should continue with it |
![]() ![]() Mia is awesome. Make her so. And she has small (awesome) parts in just the the 4th and 5th. Ya know, after the others she's in. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You know if it had been my funeral...I would have died...From laughing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I luv this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG Update, PLEASE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() your killing me . plz tell me you havent just stopped fanfic cuz you havent rlly updated any of ur stories in a while |
![]() ![]() these are amazing! keep writing :) |
![]() ![]() omg!omg!omg! when are you making more? |
![]() ![]() it is really good. PLEASE! continiou |
![]() ![]() ![]() update! !soon!update!soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story hope u udpate soon cant wait to see what happens next |