Reviews for The New Beginning
Inari no Sasuke chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
This is really good, you should definently continue it!
Patriot-112 chapter 1 . 8/21/2010
Please continue on. This shows potential.
Bri-chan chapter 1 . 8/18/2010
Love your story. U really should make this a full story. I was kinda upset too that they just died liked that. I was like can we get a kiss or a I love you at least please! Wish things turned out the way you wrote and that's what I love about... It's reasonable conclusion!
InactiveAccountMay27th chapter 1 . 8/18/2010
A very good beginning! I loved it a lot!

Please continue and keep up the good work! :)

~Karishian
rao hyuga 18 chapter 1 . 8/18/2010
cute...kinda wish kishimoto would've had things turn out like that :)
KonohaOrangeHokage chapter 1 . 8/18/2010
can you continue? don't just make this a oneshottt ! XD
RaawrImaDinosaur chapter 1 . 8/18/2010
Awww that was so sweet! i loved it, great job! i would love it even more if you made it into a full story, *hint hint* lol

and i was pretty pissed that they didnt say "i love you" to each other, but hey i can't complain, i was too upset to worry about it... best few chapters i've ever read...

anyways great job! :)