|Reviews for Sins Of A Galactic Empire|
| Dead chapter 1 . 11/20/2022
At least someone else is doing a better job of continuing this fic (so far).
You are nothing but a huge disappointment.
Especially when you outright DELETED, Sins of a Colonial Empire! Then again; the STUPID reveal that the Colonials had a off screen earlier (conspiracy) contact with the UNSC was unnecessary and out of nowhere for the sake of "shock" that did not work. Certain battles made no sense. And then the fucking Prophets suddenly attacking everyone with a powerful fleet made that a huge mess.
Not to mention you NEVER finished ONE fanfic and just outright cancelled everything to "focus" on one specific fic.
But even that one is left dead in the water and you simply disappeared. So many of your fics had potential, but all fall flat on their faces.
Though I will give you partial credit for having the Tau of all things appear in Sins of a Colonial Empire as humanities first contact way before the Covenant war and became a steadfast ally of the humans when the Covenant waged their "holy war".
| kirosyamcha chapter 3 . 7/22/2022
I’m not tactical by any means but why didn’t fighters launch on both sides as they entered each other’s engagement range?
| Guest chapter 9 . 10/3/2021
Se supone que era Tarkin, no Yularen
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/3/2021
Otras ideas que tengo para esta historia es ver como es que los Separatistas y el UNSC descubriendo la luna Da Soocha V y construyendo una base allí, junto con otros planetas de bases de la Alianza Rebelde, Crait, Aridus y Arbra por dar ejemplos, además de cómo reclutan más tropas en Neelvaan y Kalee.
| Dasgun chapter 1 . 2/12/2021
| Guest chapter 11 . 10/14/2020
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/7/2020
Me encanta tu Fanfiction,te recomiendo varias intrusucciones en este orden descrito a continuacion:
.Plantea nuevos conflictos y enfrentamientos espaciales,incluyendo la aparicion de otros Jedi,ejemplos deseables podrian ser Aayla secura de nuevo,Luminara Unduli o que tal Obi wan,anakin y Ashoka tano
.Tambien deberian aparecer otras naves espaciales del UNSC,me encantaria ver a la UNSC Infinity o los Cargueros clase Poseidon y Orion
.Que haya la aparicion de naves Covenant comandadas por las Espadas de Sanghelios,ademas,plantea la formacion de un nuevo Covenant a partir de la unificacion de los diferentes remanentes Covenant y que Sidious es descubierto al final de la Guerra de los Clones,por lo que activa la Orden 66 y huye junto a su aprendiz Darth Vader a la estacion Estrella de la muerte,
todavia en construccion
| Tony McNucklz chapter 11 . 2/22/2020
Genuinely the worst chpater to quit on short of doing it mid-battle. especially with your closing teaser. I thought I was going to get the reaction to Pietts attack and vastly more interesting see how the Jedi react to Johns one Spartan assault. Damningly disappointing.
| Redfox chapter 11 . 12/19/2019
| Reichenfaust chapter 2 . 6/20/2019
Great shielding description here.
| CelebTil chapter 1 . 5/24/2019
I think the UNSC could develop a missile that is designed to deliver an A.I. to the hull of an enemy ship housed inside a small case that as deployed the missile appears to get destroyed and the flotsam drifts toward the enemy ship the small bot housed A.I. then attaches to the comms array and disables the entire ship.
| Da boys and orks chapter 1 . 1/29/2019
I remember reading an stwr-halo fanfic where a cis ships attacks an unsc ship and the unsc sides with republic. the unsc was part of an allinace made up of elite,jackals, and hunters that what i remember
| Orrible Amroth chapter 11 . 12/4/2018
very fun and interesting story. loved the developments and really fell in love with it. such a shame you cancelled, but here's hoping for either a sudden revival or an adoption
| Guest chapter 11 . 11/24/2018
You are as as #$% mo#*$%&*#$$# this is a good storyline f#$%your negative reviews anonymous reader
| Phil 017C chapter 11 . 11/21/2018
This was certainly an amazing price of fiction indeed.