Reviews for A Fresh Start
Guest chapter 2 . 8/19/2010
Love it from Sam's pov! Update soon!
RBCrazyFan chapter 2 . 8/19/2010
Loved it! Can't wait to see the next chapter!

Catch you on the flip side
Copper's Mama chapter 2 . 8/19/2010
HUGE improvement over the last chapter. This was very good, and nice to see it from Sam's point of view. The grammar has vastly improved, kudos.

I can't wait to read more of this.
x.imagine.x chapter 1 . 8/18/2010
i really really liked this. i loved the ending!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/18/2010
Love it! Update soon! :D
jam-hands chapter 1 . 8/18/2010
confusing, but a nice idea ...
RBCrazyFan chapter 1 . 8/18/2010
This was cute but there were a few mistakes:

"if you except the..." should be "if you accept the"


"you have him her wrapped around..." I have no idea what this sentence was supposed to say.

You didn't mark it complete so I hope we see more soon!

Catch you on the flip side
allice chapter 1 . 8/18/2010
really great idea I enjoyed reading this.. Other than few run ons this was Great... Hope to read more from you:)
Copper's Mama chapter 1 . 8/18/2010
A bit choppy, and lots of run-on sentences. I would definitely suggesting finding a Beta to help you with the grammar.

This was a good idea for a fic, though I definitely think it could have been better. No, I don't say these things to insult, I say them so that you'll learn from it, and to make you a better writer.