Reviews for The Surprises That Lie Behind Every Corner
Guest chapter 3 . 9/11/2013
IPDATE IMMEDIATELY!... Pwease...
DBlade59 chapter 1 . 6/26/2013
read the 3 chapters out so far they are ok could be made a little longer but who care that the writers right to control also here some idea(s) for the writer that could be used later in the story after or around where the prologue is set. After their time together playing husband and wife Naruto decide to propose to Hinata. Also even thought I won't try to guess how you're going to do it I want to suggest that you give Naruto the power of the Rinnagan, maybe write it as he already had the power to awaken said power whenever ( door in his mindscape that lead to unknown) and decide if it can grant him the power to protect his love one (Hinata) then he would gladly face whatever risks and dangers that get in his way.
stalkerz chapter 3 . 3/6/2012
please oh please just update soon! This story is so freaking goooooooooooooood!
munagirl16 chapter 3 . 12/26/2011
This story is just tooo amazing! You need to update!
munagirl16 chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
UPDATE!
K chapter 3 . 11/19/2011
I was enjoying this story. Please finish it. Update soon.
13animaluver chapter 3 . 3/21/2011
lol hinata hi i love it and i know peeps r bussie(:P') but updaye asap!

p.s IM A GIRL!LOVE IT!
FF8cerberus chapter 3 . 3/16/2011
This whole chapter was just too hilarious! I also think she' s asking WAY TOO MUCH from Naruto and Hinata. Looking forward to see how it plays out but I see how you put the missions end in chapter one. I also want to know everyone's reaction to them bringing back a baby. Everyone's expression will be priceless. Update soon!
Odinson91 chapter 3 . 3/9/2011
Umm, it looks like you meant to put a footnote in about Hinata taking birth control but forgot.
wolfxanime chapter 3 . 3/6/2011
Are you sure this is a t rated story? lolzzzzzzzz XD love it though! Great job!
notgonnasay09 chapter 3 . 3/6/2011
Eh, not a terrible chapter overall, though I do think Tsunade could have used their troubles concerning sex as a possible cover for a trouble in the marriage rather than saying they possibly need to. Other than that, it works out fine.
Amorous Grunty chapter 2 . 10/22/2010
haha! poor hinata and her feinting spells
notgonnasay09 chapter 2 . 10/21/2010
That dumb sap. Could Naruto possibly be anymore dense? Yeah, you're gonna act like a married couple without actually doing anything...baka. A great explanation for the mission this chapter. Great job.
Lylac chapter 2 . 10/21/2010
This looks like a good story, I will be looking forward to the next chapter...
Rose Tiger chapter 2 . 10/21/2010
*Hehehe!* This is gonna be fun! Keep going!
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