|Reviews for Emery|
| LadyBluePhoenix chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
Isn't Emery Angie Harmons daughters name? Anyway some constructive criticism... a three year old would have better grammar than your Emery; the have lisps and limited vocabulary and they can get tenses wrong but they have basic sentence structure and know singular vs plural by then. Also I seriously doubt a three year old would know the First and Last name of her Doctor, unless she was a prodigy in which case her speaking skills would be more advanced. Most children, if they did know their name, would know them as Doctor _ something. You're character would probably know the doctor as Doctor Fred or Freddie.
Anyway, the interaction is sweet...I just thought I'd give you some advice on the three year old thing.
| Woootwoooot chapter 4 . 2/7/2012
So I just found this story and I just wanted to say that I love it:)
| Hakuna Matata chapter 4 . 2/3/2012
I love this story! You're writing is fantastic! Please continue:)
| Jill chapter 4 . 2/1/2012
I just found this story and I love Maura and Emery's interaction.
| Dri.Ka.Br chapter 3 . 2/1/2012
I loved the story, really good! very creative. and you write very well, gave up to imagine each scene described in the story.
and jane is what the story? it might be the girlfriend of maura, and help her take care of emery, or perhaps the man who killed his parents return, jane can protect them
| Guest chapter 3 . 2/1/2012
This is a great story! Update soon
| SimplyShash chapter 3 . 1/31/2012
Love the story. Please update more often. I love this side of Maura.
| CountessCora chapter 2 . 11/27/2010
This is so sweet! I hope you continue it.
| madelyn09 chapter 1 . 8/21/2010
very sad but good start
I can't wait for more update soon!
| Dr Dana Stowe's Sidekick chapter 1 . 8/20/2010
ty for the first review! will try to update tomorrow
| FRSC Anthro Nut chapter 1 . 8/20/2010
Awwww, keep going, i want to see how this turns out