|Reviews for Little Angela|
| MichaellaD chapter 19 . 9/15/2014
I assume you died? ;)
(Please let me be wrong, otherwise I just made a highly inappropriate joke.)
| Guest chapter 10 . 11/18/2012
Hey just wondering, not that it's a problem, why you didn't stick to Jane's wife and daughter's real names: Angela and Charlotte?
Did you know they had been named?
| 13 Jo chapter 19 . 7/7/2011
Red John? Well, it would be interesting to see where you take this story from here. Update.
| allison chapter 6 . 6/29/2011
again, decent premise, but two things: yes, this is loaded with grammatical/sentence structure errors. you might want to look for a beta reader. and two, stick to one pov, no more than two. if you tell what each ind character is thinking, it's gonna get even more difficult to read.
| Allison chapter 1 . 6/29/2011
good beginning, but you need need need to separate speaking paragraphs, otherwise it's very clumsy and hard to read. Also I hope there is some exposition in the coming chapters; need to know how old Angela is, how she came to be, circumstances of her birth, etc. I look forward to reading what comes next (how the hell is Jane gonna react to this?)
| TotalCitron chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
oh exciting! sorry, it's not long i'm in a rush.
| lil.ramen.lover chapter 18 . 4/20/2011
lisbon has green eyes.
| Jisbon4ever chapter 18 . 4/17/2011
Yay!... You updated and Lisbon woke up! Or is it Chloe. lol I bet she is anxious to know what is going on. I am so happy that Jane is happy too. :-D I am so excíted for the next chapters. P.S. I don't know if this was meant for the story but Lisbon has green eyes not brown. :-)
| 13 Jo chapter 18 . 4/17/2011
Happy to see you continuing. Update soon!
| LAurore chapter 18 . 4/17/2011
Hey ! I'm glad you updated ! Hope I could read the next chapter soon !
Bye and carry on ! ;)
| 13 Jo chapter 17 . 1/24/2011
Yay! I am happy that Angela is going to be with Jane. I really want to see how they get along. Lisbon's child with Jane! Looking forward to it. Please UPDATE!
| 13 Jo chapter 16 . 1/24/2011
I liked this chapter though it was short. And Angela was cute. Wish I could've seen Cho dozing and waking up. LOL! Loved that in Red Sky at night.
| 13 Jo chapter 15 . 1/24/2011
VanPelt's a good choice. I would've liked Jane better. But I see his point!
| LAurore chapter 17 . 1/4/2011
I like this story but I want Lisbon to get better !
| Anna chapter 17 . 1/4/2011
I like that Jane has ro watch over Angela. Looking forward to more!