Reviews for Make You Notice
ImpalaLove chapter 1 . 10/30/2013
This was beautifully done! So sad but you stayed so true to the characters and I love your language, especially this line:

"He had him right here and that was the safety boat, even though the current was pulling him away"

Such great imagery. Really, I loved this and I don't care how long ago it was written, it's definitely going in my Favorites.
casammy chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
It has made me cry damn but always imagine that something like that has happened when dean allows to go to sam far from him. I remember that in the season one dean said to sammy that his father was looking for him in Stanford, suppose that dean was going more of followed when it did though sam not it wise, that looking at such dean's history for sammy in Stanford in the darkness
CHAILYN chapter 1 . 9/25/2010
I'm so ridiculously, incredibly behind. Somehow it slipped my attention how many things I've missed over here...especially your fics...

Oh...I'm sobbing like a baby. This was just heartbreaking the way things went down. When Dean just crammed the money into Sam's pocket...

I love the way you pictured this. I think you've written my very favorite, "sam goes off to school" fic.

"Dean nodded to himself, his hand wiped his face and stopped to rub his chin, his eyes closing much like Sam's and when he looked back.

Sam swore he saw Dean let him go."


'scuse me while I go nurse my broken heart.
lucablue chapter 1 . 9/7/2010
Well you had me hooked with the song...I reckon Caleb Followill's voice could sing me back from the so many KoL lyrics fit Spn perfectly!

You used the song beautifully and the image you created was so sad yet so believable... poor Sammy so torn between leaving and dreaming and then Dean being...well, just perfectly Dean with his love for Sam always coming first before his own wants/needs.

"Sam swore he saw Dean let him go."...and the stoic walls of self sacrifice are put in place yet again and Sam knows Dean loves him and awwww...this line really did it for me!

*hugz* for sharing this...niiicely done!
CeCe Away chapter 1 . 8/24/2010
Lovely. This is the first one that showed how proud Dean was, even helped Sam go. I like it.
KKBELVIS chapter 1 . 8/24/2010
My two favorite lines below:

Most kids don't pack up everything and leave, most kids don't stop smiling, they don't cry at dead end bus stops"


Most kids aren't you, huh Sam?" Dean gave a small smile and it never reached his eyes.



So good...I loved this so much!

Thank you for sharing your works and creative dreams!

darksupernatural chapter 1 . 8/20/2010
That was awesome, heartbreaking and hopeful all at once. Thanks for sharing sweetie!
ritsam chapter 1 . 8/19/2010

Aww...thanks for the tissue warning...I really needed it.

Stanford era is my favorite timeline. Sammy...oh Dean! They love each other so much! I love them too...

Love it, keep up the good work.

Colby's girl chapter 1 . 8/19/2010
That was good. I remember that time in my life when getting letters from different universities and the decisions I was making weighed so heavy on my shoulders. I survived and so will you. Trust your dreams and your heart. Good luck.
skag trendy chapter 1 . 8/19/2010
'"Most kids aren't you, huh Sam?" Dean gave a small smile and it never reached his eyes.'

That's pretty profound, hon. Loved it.

This was a very bitter-sweet fic, and I understand just where you're coming from. 18 years ago I went through the same thing with A levels. Got 2 E grades, but I still got into Uni, got a decent degree, and now earn a good salary - but trust me when I say that money ain't everything. And bad grades aren't the end of the world, babes.

So, what dya get? I assume you've found out by now...

Love and hugs,

ST xxx
LaylaBinx chapter 1 . 8/18/2010
Aww this was beautiful sweetie! I love the way you used this song too, simply amazing! Great job as always honey! :D
TeamDean79 chapter 1 . 8/18/2010
That was very teary, even though it was amazing. I loved it. It's wondeful. And I really feel for you...good luck. I'll pray for ya, okay?