|Reviews for The Bitter River|
| toeki chapter 1 . 2/16/2011
interesting. beautifully written.
i like how you described the symbolism of the maps, the gaps for places not discovered yet,the different meaning of spelling and languages, and how altair is compared to a mark on the map. will he be a dark and dangerous place on maliks map? i guess hes not a blank gap...
| Xenna-the-Nobody chapter 1 . 8/22/2010
oh my god i love this it's so cute how Malik is so intrested in maps. I've noticed how he always has a map and a compass in front of him. My sister and i always make fun of altair for being so bad ass and this made me laugh when i read it. Keep it up i can wait for the next chapter