Reviews for Surrender
Inventor of ZADRF chapter 1 . 11/10
You may notice that im basically going through all your stories haha... But i like the take on this story. I mean yeah i would love to have seen them give in but you make a valid point. They are both pretty loyal to their home planets and have fought for them pretty hard despite the them this want they have is just another challenge. I like how you wrote it's easy to want but it's hard to resist it, or something similar to that. To me this is a more realistic perspective on zadr that no one seems to try and tackle (even though zadr isnt normally 100% realistic)
Guest chapter 1 . 1/24
Great work!
All of dat tension is just fabulous
glowzilla48 chapter 1 . 5/20/2014
You should make a second part to this, it would be a good continuation of the struggle to control their feelings for each other. Eventually one of them is going to break _ But it was still very fun to read
Guest chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
Angelwings2000 chapter 1 . 7/26/2012
it was great, hyuman
nevernotalways chapter 1 . 4/21/2012
Hotness aside, the lingering darkness of the restraint and the want is what makes this so incredible. There really isn't enough tastefully done ZADR, but this was perfect. I'm going to go read everything you wrote now, probably.
Ramona Flours chapter 1 . 11/27/2011
Wow. That was incredibly good. I loved it! 3 They were both so in-character, and you left me just wanting more! AND MORE. AND MORE *.* Lol Dib too. It'd be nice if there could be a little sequel to this :D Very good though. Pretty damn amazing :)
ms.Clair K Ookami chapter 1 . 8/1/2011
Really good!
Xenon Z chapter 1 . 7/15/2011
Personally, I thought that was amazing.

... :D!

Wow! The characters were surprisingly In Character and this all seemed so probable! I liked it a lot, and if you wanted to I wouldn't mind reading more of it. (Pssh, who am I kiding? I'd be squealing in fangirlish delight if there was more! XD)

All in all, wonderful one shot. I'll have to read more of your works now! :p
xXx-Monkey-D-KumikoxXX chapter 1 . 6/29/2011
*crowd chant* WE WANT MORE WE WANT MORE lol awesome story again with the teasing one shots! y u taunt me soooo? haha
Gingerbread Owl chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
I have a rather delightful sensation in MY squeedlyspooch thanks to this fic.
GraphiteTroll chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
The sexual tension between those to morons was delicous~ Bravo!
Jennifer the Dark chapter 1 . 3/13/2011
I'm not normally a fan of ZADR, but this was amazingly written! Great work!
Onafiel-Isil chapter 1 . 3/8/2011
So fucking hot! It was perfect the way you describe how they both want to give in but they never allow themselves because they got duties and loyalties to keep! But even though they know they are gonna do it everyday! I love this!
Fronaucity chapter 1 . 2/8/2011
Those two... they're so stubborn. Reading this made my neck hurt... Ouchie.
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