Reviews for How Topher Brink Lost His Pants
visitmyao3writingramblr chapter 5 . 5/29/2012
More please! I was wondering the title of this story the whole episode lol.
emmkitt chapter 5 . 1/3/2011
One of the best Dollhouse fanfictions I've ever read. Amazing how you managed to write Adelle so accurately, I could almost hear every line in her voice. :) More please!
sara-anne-roe chapter 5 . 9/16/2010
Hey, very cute story! I liked it muchly and look forward to the epilogue :)

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Skate-815 chapter 5 . 8/25/2010
Well I really like Dominic, so I feel kinda bad for him in the end. But I suppose he did have it coming.

If I haven't said this yet, there's something about the dialogue that feels right in this fic. You seem to have mastered Adelle's voice in particular.

Looking forward to the epilogue.
Skate-815 chapter 3 . 8/25/2010
You have a plan? :o. How very unlike you :p

I like how this is developing. I liked the little refrence to the Echo apology too, because that was a scene I liked on the show.

I'll be back to read the next two in a couple of hours, but you're doing a good job so far.
the little harlequin chapter 5 . 8/21/2010
"Soft, like a kitty." Haha. If I had been in Topher's position, watching that security feed with Dominic there, I don't think I would've been able to resist saying it. xD

I love evil!Dominic, you write him really well. But I'm glad "Operation: Take Down Dominic" succeeded and now nothing stands in the way of Adelle/Topher! Huzzah! :D

Also, I loved how you managed to incorporate canon into this by mentioning how Dom still believes he's won, because he's secretly an agent. Heck, *this* story is a part of my own personal canon now! :) (Also, Dom, way to remain optimistic, if only you knew. :P)

And, yay, for the Adelle/Topher-ness at the end! :D Loved it! Ha, of course, Topher would want to watch the video one more time! :P Hee, hee. I can't wait to find out how Topher Brink actually did lose his pants! Update soon! Pretty please? :D
the little harlequin chapter 4 . 8/20/2010
Another awesome chapter! :)

"Operation: Take Down Dominic!" - hee! That's our Christopher Brink, alright! xD

I love the way that Adelle and Topher are wondering are they actually attracted to each other and are trying to fight it if they are (dudes, don't fight it, just give in!). :D

Can't wait to find out what's going to happen (and how Operation: Take Down Dominic is going to go! xD). Please update soon! :)
the little harlequin chapter 3 . 8/20/2010
Hooray for plans! :)

But, uh-oh, looks like Dom's got a plan too! No, Dom, don't get Topher fired or have Adelle get rid of Echo! Nooooo!

Loved this chapter so much! :D You've got all the characters written perfectly - it's almost like watching this all happen on the show (oh, how awesome it would've been if it did!).xD

What's gonna happen now? Oh, I can't wait for the next chapter! Please, please, *please* update soon! :)

P.S. Thanks for the dedication! *hugs*
Skate-815 chapter 2 . 8/19/2010
Dominic saw it? Ha, I didn't expect that. Tbh, I was sure it was Adelle watching it.

I do love Topher though. I hope he doesn't get him fired.

I'm of course looking forward to the last part.
Skate-815 chapter 1 . 8/19/2010
For some reason, I liked the admittedly strange pairing of Topher/Echo, but I really liked this fic too.

It was v funny, and I liked the 'frak' at the end, because even though I didn't watch it, I know that's a BG thing lol.

Right, I'm now off to read chapter 2
the little harlequin chapter 2 . 8/19/2010
Ahh, so Dom was the other viewer! NOOOOO! DOM! DON'T GET TOPHER FIRED! *ahem* NOOOOO! DOM! DON'T GET TOPHER FIRED! xD

Perhaps there is some footage of him at Freemont? "This gun is, like, so heavy. It makes my arms tired", "Soft like a kitty", ring any bells, Dom? Haha. :)

Really liked the little Adelle bit at the start. Hee, hee, she *so* flirted with Topher. She so did. (And, btw, bouncing on a trampoline makes you an awesome boss, Adelle!).

I can't wait to see what you have in store for the next part! *bounces up and down excitedly* Update soon! :D
the little harlequin chapter 1 . 8/19/2010
Yay! You wrote it! You wrote it! You wrote it! *jumps up and down happily*

This was awesome! :) I was grinning like crazy as I read it. Oh, Topher and Adelle, what have you gotten yourselves into? (And, don't even *try* to blame it on the drug! :P)

Haha, let me guess, the other viewer was Adelle? Hee, you should totally add more to this! Pretty please? *bribes you with chocolate chip cookies*

And, yes, I have officially been converted to an Adelle/Topher shipper! I actually squealed when Topher said that the drug could be airborne or spread through touch and then he touched Adelle's arm. :D

Thanks for the dedication! *hugs* xD