Reviews for harry's new beginings |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Good story so far looking forward to more of it |
![]() ![]() ![]() UPDATE PLEASE |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update your story soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't read this anymore. Grammarly is a free online spelling/grammar tool, and I highly recommend that you acquire it and make heavy use of it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah I love it please add more |
![]() ![]() Thanks was quite cool |
![]() ![]() Think about it joker, a five year old beats you up when bat man can't and the kid does it faster hilarious. Try making fun of batman to his face with that! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is very good and I would love to see it continued if that is possible |
![]() ![]() ![]() So fantastic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can you put catwoman in it because Ivy, Harley, and catwoman all joined together at one point and became friends. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know who I want in the harem . Cho,Hermione, Luna, catwoman,raven,and Rouge. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why are u plaguerizing HARRY ISLEY story... this is almost WORD for fucking WORD... |
![]() ![]() Meh, you're spelling and grammar needs a lot of work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() so far not bad needs a beta reader to help with your grammar errors tho |
![]() ![]() ![]() He mugged joker... I can die happy now! |