Reviews for The Nature of Power
zuiztrt chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
Loved this story, it had just the right amount of everything for me :)
Samurai5725 chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
This was extremely good. Now... if only this was cannon. I'd play the game 50 times. :3 Also I wonder how Desmond would be responding to such a situation... _; Poor guy.
Texasoras chapter 1 . 1/24/2012
Absolutely amazing! I couldn't stop reading it, so much love and passion and just the anticipation of what comes in the next paragraph
CinamonSwirls chapter 1 . 4/21/2011
Once again, you have blown me away. (Ohoho). The way you structured this story was just brilliant. At the end when you finally find out the truth - I was on the verge of tears, okay. I felt like crying when Leonardo and Ezio were arguing. My heart ached for the two of them. And that is what makes you such a good author; you affect the reader on a much deeper level than most writers. Normally I'd be a little upset or slightly peeved, but I actually had to collect myself and take a short break - considering I was reading this on the train on and if I'd gotten over emotional that could have been really quite embarassing XD

But again, I salute you, for writing something as.. Darkly beautiful as this. I hope to see more from you soon, since I think now you are definately one of my favourite writers. It's not often when I find someone with such skill as you. You have a gift, you really do. Nothing but praise comes to mind.
Konoko89 chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
My goodness! Please yes! Make him pay! Where is the sequel where he makes him pay! i must see it. This was so intriguing and amazing. I know I will read this many times ... and a sequel if there is one :)
Vampiress-Alexiel chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
I've actually read this on y-gallery, and I must say, when I found it on , I had to stop and read it all over again! I love this so much, because it always makes me feel so many different emotions... from sad, to angry, and then filled with a warmth that only a good story can give when the ending turns out to be unexpectedly ...not really happy, but extremely satisfying!

I feel so bad for Leonardo, and yet his strength of will is so freaking amazing that he stays behind with Cesare. The characterization, and the little subtleties you write in their expressions and mannerisms just astounds me!

Absolutely love it, and so glad Leo wasn't in league with Cesare.
MythicElf chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
Leonardo, you are fucking brilliant. That entire thing with caterina and cesare and... Just wow. That was so smart of them. (therefore, you.)

Congratulations on your smartitudes!
hatsukidamaru chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
good god author, look at you so amazing, where have you been all this time! I loved this, please know that I'm ready to religiously check everyday for the next chapter... or another one similar. I bow to you oh might writer, may you live a thousand years to write delicious beautiful smut!
Valante chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
Perfect twist at the end, I did not see it coming. (Was in fact rather miffed by Leonardo's OOC-ness until the end.) Very good writing, too, though there was something missing in the scene from Cesare's POV-the predator's elation throughout the "kill", perhaps?
crawlcarrymethrough chapter 1 . 10/28/2010
Love the fact that Leo's a better liar than we take him for. Not to mention the fact that Cesare is just an idiot who thinks he can hurt Ezio without some form of ramification. Can't wait until I can actually play Brotherhood and assassinate the little maggot. Great writing, great story!
omigosh chapter 1 . 8/28/2010


the ending really got to me. ;_; I'm (sort of) glad Ezio and Leonardo "stayed" together. And ARGH. I HATE BORGIA AGHAG.

you, good person, are awesomesauce on toast. I TIP MY HAT TO YOU. -sobs-
Prats 'R' Us chapter 1 . 8/22/2010
wow this was really awesome! I actually want more! I love this one, the ending surprised me and I'm so happy Leo's not evil! D
Fyine chapter 1 . 8/21/2010
Wow. Just... Wow. I honestly did not expect the ending, even though I should have seen that coming.

This is seriously the one of the best Assassin's Creed slash fiction I've read. Thanks for writing this.
Tartin chapter 1 . 8/20/2010
A wonderful story full of elements that make it memorable. The smut scenes were amazingly hot but there was so much feeling and motivation to the characters that it was more than just glorified porn. Certain parts definitely tugged at my heart strings, particularly Leo's supposed betrayal and Ezio's reaction (which looking back you realize how much more painful it would have been for Ezio to witness seeing proof of Leonardo's 'sleeping with the enemy' for information) . The whole time I was thinking no way Leonardo would have turned from Ezio, there must be something else going on here (which there was, thank god) but towards the end even you had me finally convinced that Leo HAD betrayed Ezio.

Usually I don't think much of any extra characters thrown in for the extra kink factor, besides 'yay, hot' but you got me really hating Cesare for what he was doing and even found myself thinking 'don't you dare touch Leonardo! He's Ezio's!' haha.

Overall I really enjoyed your story and would definitely love to read more AC fics from you in the near future.
KatChampagne chapter 1 . 8/19/2010
I'm so happy you didn't turn Leo evil! Great story and way awesome.
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