|Reviews for Our World|
| Fleur50 chapter 11 . 4/12
Merci pour l'épilogue, j'ai cru pendant une minute que vous arrêtez là j'étais très déçue.
| Fleur50 chapter 9 . 4/12
| Fleur50 chapter 8 . 4/12
| Fleur50 chapter 7 . 4/12
| Fleur50 chapter 6 . 4/12
| Fleur50 chapter 5 . 4/10
| Fleur50 chapter 4 . 4/10
| Fleur50 chapter 3 . 4/10
| Fleur50 chapter 1 . 4/9
| soonbefound chapter 11 . 1/5
| Lia Alice chapter 1 . 12/18/2015
I really love your story, and I am so glad that you're continued it! But as I am German I feel the need to tell you that "you are beautiful" is translated to "du bist wunderschön" and "I love you" to "ich liebe dich".
What you wrote means "I love to read" :)
I hope you will continue to write as beautiful stories as you already do!
| LAB1 chapter 11 . 9/7/2014
Very interesting story. They are so young. I would have felt better if they met at 17 instead of 15. They are both so young. Especially for Bella being raised mainstream. I met my husband right after I turned 17 and that was barely old enough for a long relationship. We didn't marry until our 20s though.
| Vamps09 chapter 11 . 8/18/2014
Loved this one too, thanks for writing
| Sabella Rose chapter 7 . 8/12/2014
Go Bella! Edward man up and stop pick on Bella. She's your wife not your slave.
| Guest chapter 2 . 5/23/2014
Baby blues or too young?