Reviews for Seducer
Lawrence Helmbain chapter 1 . 5/25/2013
Update
Guest chapter 1 . 3/5/2013
Too short.
Neliel Tu Oderschvank Espada 3 chapter 1 . 3/29/2011
can't wait for more hun this is a really good story and i want to now waht naru-chan will do now
Shadow Kitsune67 chapter 1 . 12/8/2010
ooh a femOro fic. x) I do prefer yaoi but hey. Genderbend fics are awesome. :P Looking forward to your update :3
fanofmany chapter 1 . 11/19/2010
That is scary... XD
Gold Testament chapter 1 . 9/23/2010
1. have the lines seperated by a space

2. make the chapters longer

3. epic job on the first chapter

4. make the next chapter as soon as possible
Fox Boss chapter 1 . 9/17/2010
Please continue this story, I can tell it has a lot of potential.
bretmccully chapter 1 . 9/9/2010
Do continue the story it got interesting but it was a little short on the length
Reaper7 chapter 1 . 8/21/2010
I don't know why, but for some reason I want to know what happens.
Red Moon Soul chapter 1 . 8/19/2010
Mmm... I am new at writing fanfiction so I intentionally left the details of what happens to be imagined by the reader...

and its more about the "I WANT IT AND I WANT IT NOW" moment...

After that anything can happen (Oro falling in love or blocking the feelings or kidnapping Naruto to be her loveslave or anything else) so feel free to write a full story if you want)
ryo tadagachi chapter 1 . 8/19/2010
please make another chapter!

and more pairings like this!
Shihouin Shunshin chapter 1 . 8/19/2010
Seems more of a prologue than a one-shot.

femOrochimaru is quite unique...though the rush of 'I want you, Naruto-kun..' seems a bit rushed, since theres little to no character.

As i said, feels like a prologue.