Reviews for Pieces of Us
animeXIII chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
I found you trailer on Youtube. I've already read your story, but seeing it made me read it again. Awesome work on this fic and the trailer.
Free water-drop wind chapter 17 . 2/19/2011
Hey, can you post a non-chap later do say the name of the sequel?

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Nara
Reading4soul chapter 17 . 1/26/2011
I like the background stories you created for Zack and Cloud in this (lol, and thanks for not killing Zack) and also for Isa and Lea. Nice job.

On rare occasion (like last chapters - Castle Oblivion) I get the feeling that you're trying to cram too many characters in, which stifles their interaction a bit imo, but overall great effort. :)
Zinxx chapter 16 . 1/6/2011
I wish I could give you a proper, five-pages long review but it all boils down to "I love this story" so that's what I'm stickin' to, I love this story.
clack chapter 16 . 1/5/2011
Men Gud. Jag hade tydligen fel, det gick att avsluta berättelsen på så få kapitel. Det känns verkligen tomt nu när berättelsen nått sitt slut, fast epilogen finns ju kvar såklart. Jag har faktiskt en känsla av att det här inte är slutet för Lea. Om man ska gå efter mönstret här så tycks det verkligen finnas en "allsmäktig kraft" som ser till att människorna här lär sig något med hjälp av sina liv. Första Lea var nyfiken och här i din berättelse så föll både Lea och Isa för sina hämndkänslor vilket tärde på deras hjärtan och gjorde så att de föll i mörker. Deras liv som Nobodies tärde på Axels och Saïxs vänskap men det fanns ändå kvar där för när de återuppväcktes till liv igen så var Saïx fortfarande upprörd över att Axel övergivit honom och deras planer. Axel mindes bara frustrationen han känt när Roxas lämnat Organisationen och desperationen av att vara ensam. Därför var hans uppdrag som nyfödd Lea att komma till grund med dom känslorna, Roxas var inte skyldig honom något. Ingen är skyldig någon något, man ska ge för att det känns rätt inte för att få någon annan att stå i skuld. Det är vad Saïx fick med sig innan han dog och det är vad Lea kom att förstå innan han pratade med Ven och det var med den inställningen som han "dog" igen. Det är löst, men jag tror att det finns mer att lära och därför kan dom inte dö ännu. Inte på riktigt i alla fall.

Mina kompisar står inte ut med mig när jag blir så här och jag måste erkänna att det har blivit mer av den här varan efter att jag börjat läsa din berättelse. Jag älskar den verkligen och det kommer att bli svårt att hitta nåt som håller samma standard och som inte helt tas över av romans. Jag ser verkligen framemot epilogen och jag hoppas på att få se mer av dig.
JeNeSaisQuoi chapter 16 . 1/5/2011
What? No, I'm not crying. I mean, this is just the saddest thing I've come across! Bloody hell! And to top it off you're making me like the Sue's of Kingdom Hearts.

This story is awesome, I'm sure I've said it before but hell, it doesn't hurt to be said again. Lea went through so much to get here and - Christ, here I go again - he had a lesson to learn. That's what I get out of this. His lesson was to learn to let go and thank the Gods for what he did get. And you know, life isn't always fair 'cause Cloud got Zack but as my roomie always likes to point out, bad things happen to good people and there was no way there was going to be a happy ending for Lea. Not in the way he wanted it to since there was a bigger picture to take into account.

I’ll wrap this up before I get too philosophical. Bring the epilogue to us soon! ;D
Axel'sChakrams8 chapter 10 . 1/5/2011
AAAAWWWWWWWWW! That was so awsomely, painfully, heartbreakingly, beautiful. T-T. But at least Axel/ Lea, whatever isn't evil anymore and I'm glad that he made up w/ his friend before that tragic thing happened. Bittersweetness is a wierd thing but that chapter was really refreashing and well written. props to you!
Axel'sChakrams8 chapter 10 . 1/4/2011
AAAAWWWWWWWWW! That was so awsomely, painfully, heartbreakingly, beautiful. T-T. But at least Axel/ Lea, whatever isn't evil anymore and I'm glad that he made up w/ his friend before that tragic thing happened. Bittersweetness is a wierd thing but that chapter was really refreashing and well written. props to you!
Axel'sChakrams8 chapter 8 . 1/4/2011
Lol, stupid thing won't let me sign in. Anyway, just wanted to let you know that ur spelling "reports" wrong and ur spelling it like "raports". Good job w/ the story, though I wish Axel wasn't acting so evil bfore. At least I know why now and he's starting to mellow out
Axel'sChakrams8 chapter 1 . 1/4/2011
Nooooo! why is Axel being so evil with no apparent reason? Yes he's in character and yes he's awsome and my favorite, but he was never evil! Great story, though. Guess I'll just have to pretend he's an actual badguy T-T But seriously, Axel does care if someone dies, make no mistake.
RoyalDumplings chapter 16 . 1/4/2011
Wooo! Wow, I was not expecting that at all. Absolutely astounding, heartbreaking and beautiful. The conversation between Axel and Ven (Roxas?) had my chest tied in a knot, it was so frickin’ sad! Axel (or should I say Lea?) had been looking for him this entire time and he only got to say a few words before he lost him again. Aqua made me shed a few tears to be honest. Talk about irony, having her entire life engulfed by the light she had fought for and defended. And Zack trying to get her out of there.

I was never really scared that you’d kill Sora, Riku and Kairi because they are the heroes after all and well, they have to live.

This was a great story and you explored relationships between characters that I had never really thought possible, like Lea and Cloud or Tifa and Cid, let’s not forget Lea and Saix. The development in both characters and relationships was so cool to see as well. Just look at Lea in the beginning of this story and look at him now. You had him nailed to the bone!

I’ll keep an eye out for the epilogue and for your future stories. Thank you for writing “Pieces of Us” and sharing it with us all.
yousaytomatoIsayfcukoff chapter 16 . 1/4/2011
Hun! Where the H*** have you been? I hope you enjoyed all the emails I sent ya. Yeah, I do not sound like a crazy woman. Gosh!

Also, damn you! I wept like a baby reading this! I felt sorry for everyone and they had all fought so hard to get to what they wanted but not everyone gets their happy ending. And Lea! Hun, I cried so hard at the ending. It took like two hours for me to read through this chapter and now I’m all lightheaded and tired. Still, I love this story with all my fangirl heart and I beg of you to please update with the epilogue as soon as possible because I’m a very impatient reader who needs closure before I lose the little sanity I have left. I love you, hun and congrats on such a wonderful story. It’s definitely a fav and I will read it over and over again.

Now update with the epilogue!
Here but not notiiced chapter 16 . 1/3/2011
GREAT CHAPTER! :D

-gives you a million dollars- :x
clack chapter 15 . 12/20/2010
Riku är för tusan för underbar. Klart att han är redo att svälja stoltheten för att rädda Sora! Man blir riktigt varm om hjärtat av att läsa om alla dessa storslagna vänskapsband. Det är en härligt att se kontraster i det hela också. Tifas och Clouds problem i kontrast med Rikus och Soras vänskap, Leas kvicka och sarkastiska kommentarer i kontrast med Zacks vänligare ton. Kairi spelade en stor roll också och det är så roligt att se att hennes krafter kommer till nytta! Det är ovanligt. Det var ett spännande avslut på detta kapitel! Jag hoppas verkligen att du planerar på att uppdatera berättelsen snart för jag tror att jag talar för alla oss läsare när jag säger vi väntar ivrigt på fortsättningen.
RoyalDumplings chapter 15 . 12/20/2010
Tifa has to go through so much for Cloud. It's too bad that there never seems to be a good time for them to speak out about stuff but you captured it well. Tifa doesn't want to nag and Cloud wants to be able to tell her stuff but he's not sure how to express himself and to top it off there's a fight between Light and Darkness going on in the background!

The cliffhanger is a killer. Seriously, you need to update pronto! Just by that sentence alone it feels like Sephiroth's theme should be playing in the background.
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