|Reviews for Heart of the Swarm|
| lemony.club chapter 3 . 7/18/2014
More please! This is so darn good :)
| asd chapter 3 . 6/12/2014
is this story dead? please no.. please please no
| chaoswizard chapter 3 . 2/19/2014
keep it coming plz
| AJGuardian chapter 3 . 1/28/2014
Well, this could have been more awesome, buuut...as we can see there isn't anything new in a LONG time. So can we assume that you just up and left this completely now?
| Endless Sorcerer B.Battler chapter 3 . 6/7/2013
Hell no dont put sakura with Naruto and Naruto should pair with Nova or Sarah...please update thanks
| Darkth Shadow chapter 3 . 4/24/2013
nice story, I hope narufo completely fucks up their love and gets Sarah for himself though.
| Wasber chapter 3 . 3/18/2013
please more sir?
| god of all chapter 3 . 3/15/2013
Great chapter story so far please continue this story soon
| Exanime Draco chapter 3 . 3/12/2013
Well shit. I just looked at the last time this story was updated. Damn it thats frustrating. I've gotten hooked on this story and it hasn't been up dated since 08-09-12. I really hope you haven't abandoned this story and that you do continue to write it as I've really enjoyed it up to this point. I do have to say though what will Kurama's chakra have done to Naruto? I understand that he has at least some level of resistance to it's toxic like effects since he's been dealing with it since birth. However, given that he just took on a full 100% blast of the 9 tailed foxes chakra one has to wonder if his body hasn't been forcibly changed in a manner similar to what the zerg do. Though in his case it's probably a slit pupil, fox ears, a number of tails and clawed hands, heightened reflexes, improved senses, minus the "I've come to slaughter you all for no good reason but entertainment" attitude. I think that would be rather interesting to read about. Particularlly if he just up and regained consciousness for a bit for flipping out and going through such a transformation. That's just my opinion though, it is after all your story, at any rate however, I really do hope that you update this story again soon. I've become rather hooked on it despite only three chapters. So I truly hope that it hasn't been abandoned and that at the very least your just waiting to beat the latest starcraft game to add more to the story.
Good luck with all your work and life and hope to read the next chapter soon!
| Exanime Draco chapter 2 . 3/12/2013
Once again an interesting chapter I look forward to the next one. I hope that you don't give up on writing this story as unlike most sci-fi stories it's written very well.
| Exanime Draco chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
Well this was a pretty good chapter. I recently saw the the starcraft 2 trailer and while I've only played a little bit of the original starcraft game I still enjoyed it. After watching the trailer while I have no idea who most of the people or events that took place in the story line for starcraft are or why they occurred I think I should be able to figure it out without too much difficulty.
| Akuma-Heika chapter 3 . 2/6/2013
"We did," Jim agreed and rolled his cigar in between his thumb and index finger. "However, I require her services as a ghost and not as an indoctrinate brain washed Spectre."
"I will not stand for this," Tosh spat in fury and stormed out, leaving the command deck in the process.
Very OOC. Canon Spectre Process is only done by willing subjects and the Spectres are completely sane...just have quirks like reading Orange Pornagraphy lol
There are differences from canon. I am guessing you have not read SCII Flashpoint.
Hope to see updates soon!
| Akuma-Heika chapter 2 . 2/6/2013
The reason Sakura is even considered in this story is because I need and wanted to bring one other person to the Starcraft Universe and I can't bring one and not bring the other. I am sure you guys already figured out whom.
Kakashi? He is dead now though. Being left on Char unconscious while it is being nuked...
Good News: You won't have to deal with Sakura for more than two maybe three more chapters. I'll give you guys a hint… Starship Troopers!
| Akuma-Heika chapter 1 . 2/6/2013
clean the Zerg homeworld.
Why are you talking of the planet Zemus?
Okay if Sarah will be paired with Jim (and thank you for no NaruSaku) than might I suggest Nova? Unless you pair her with Tosh (which given their history, even if she doesn't remember it, doable). Otherwise I would suggest an OC Spectre or Infested.
| Hachichiyyin chapter 3 . 1/29/2013