|Reviews for A HERO'S LAMENT|
| Dare to be Something More chapter 1 . 11/27/2016
This was rushed, but I think that's what you were trying to get at because Luke was probably rushing to do everything at once when he was losing everything at once. Great job!
| brightsunnydays chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
AWWWWWWW I'm gonna cry! *sob*
good story otherwise *continues to sob*
| miyame-chan chapter 1 . 12/31/2010
*sob* poor luke! nice story! :)
| emily chapter 1 . 10/22/2010
| koalakoala chapter 1 . 8/21/2010
It's nicely characterized. Good grammar, too. A little short, but that's not awful. The only thing you should probably change is to properly capitalize the title and summary. So it would be "A Hero's Lament" and "Luke's final thoughts."
| jenna M. Kent chapter 1 . 8/20/2010
| theatrechic123 chapter 1 . 8/19/2010
This is really amazing! You really captured the emotions well, and it made it a good little read for me :) keep writing!
| koil163 chapter 1 . 8/19/2010
its kinda ironic eh? its time. kronos time. people want more time. people want more kronos