Reviews for Needs A Little Work
NickChick22 chapter 12 . 5/27
So glad to see you return! Excited for where your story will take you. Happy writing!
cheshire15 chapter 12 . 5/24
I liked it, I hope Bella has more a friendship with Jake Than romance and she sees his true colors soon. And Ed needs a reality check and why are he and Emmett hanging out with her bullies wtf ?! Love the story thanks for updating
EdwardBellaRenesmeCullen chapter 4 . 5/24
Good luck with your story. I like it at the beginning but when I read part you make annoy Alice parent are Esme and Carlisle make me don't want to continued. I only like to read story Edward parent are esme and Carlisle.
Patriciadiane chapter 14 . 5/23
Diana Black 12 chapter 14 . 7/4/2016
I love this, you should totally continue this story :)
gleefan2009 chapter 14 . 3/26/2016
love it please write more
sujari6 chapter 14 . 8/11/2013
Love how Bella dealt with Edward and Tanya.
PoseyRosey chapter 14 . 8/10/2013
Still loving this storyline :)
TwilighterSam1989 chapter 14 . 8/10/2013
I think i was dying of laughter with Alice.. That was so funny
1234567890inactive chapter 14 . 8/9/2013
I don't have songs for this chapter but I do have more so let me know if you would like some more songs.
PoseyRosey chapter 13 . 8/9/2013
Can't wait for the next chapters
PoseyRosey chapter 12 . 8/9/2013
This is so exciting, looking forward to the war :D
TwilighterSam1989 chapter 13 . 8/9/2013
Oh i love Alice she would say things out loud when i think it. She And Bella would be Good
For Edward ;) evil laugh
TwilighterSam1989 chapter 12 . 8/9/2013
I like it and hope soon Edward Will not act like an arrogant ass
1234567890inactive chapter 13 . 8/8/2013
i gave you some songs in the last chapter but here's some more...

Ordinary Average Guy by Joe Walsh
F**k You by Lily Allen
Yolo by The Lonley Island
C'mon by Panic! At The Disco feat. Fun.
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