This was an interesting plot and you could've made more out of it - at least it felt too rushed for me at the end...

found it on tls

I really enjoyed this, hot and smutty!

i thought it’ll be about them and their child but naw.. not disappointed tho! i love this story!

i’m so mad, bella should’ve gone somewhere outside forks and never come back to edward even if he forces her. i hate this edward, he IS manipulative after all

bEllA swEEtiE what ArE yOu doInG

so like.. edward’s using bella? really dude?

god.. this edward

so he’s falling for her ?

the energies these two have.. that made me wonder. anyway i feel like they’re going to meet again in forks but let’s just see

fuck yes i’m bothered and hot

I never in my life was so frustrated and angry during a reading a story.
Edward is an asshole and Bella too dumb to sayno for once.
This story is so fucked up. Sorry but who can enjoy reading this stuff. Every five minutes they hook up for half the chapter and the other part is Edward manipulating Bella to his pleasure.

I really can't read more. I had hoped that for once Bella pushes him away for good so that he realize what he does to her.
He constantly plays with her emotions and mind.

I thought after the police station, Bella tells him to fuck of or really tells him her mind, get angry and leave him.
No...they go eat pie. Wow...
I am out of this shit.

Just wanted to say how much I enjoyed your characters and story. Thanks for sharing it.

This was a great story, a little ttle crazy but I enjoyed it very much! Holy hell, do people really have that much sex?! Hot damn I’d be dead and I love sex! Lol

I love it so much PUÑETA!

I've loved reading this! I really would love to have more chapters of these two