Reviews for Ride
deni9723 chapter 1 . 5/12/2023
I love this story so much, I always come back to it time and time again. Is there a chance you’ll write a future-take? It would be awesome to read about them navigating a family life with their children.
Shazzeer chapter 19 . 10/17/2022
No pitter patter from little feet just yet. But Edward does enjoy the chase, not easy with both travelling for work.
Shazzeer chapter 18 . 10/17/2022
Awww, might hear the little putter patter of tiny little thiefs soon? ;)
Shazzeer chapter 17 . 10/17/2022
Ohhh damn, he really just asked that! Ohh boy, Bella will absolutely blow up!. First he almost kidnaps her and the. Takes her out on the boat so that she can’t run away h Tim she possibly says yes. He ain’t playing around, he means business.
Shazzeer chapter 16 . 10/17/2022
* snorts * Edward got Bella good, again! He knows how to play her like a slide guitar. He could play her strings for days upon days.

Acupuncture and pressure points are interesting and can be used for many things, pleasure and pain ;). Now, how will Bella go On with Charlie?
Shazzeer chapter 15 . 10/17/2022
Charlie will come around…eventually.
And little Bella has fallen from grace, the good girl is fucking the well knows car thief. If the FBI has a print, I believe it belongs to Alice ;). Or Clearwater was just straight up bluffing ;).

Poor Bella being treated as a suspect, playing dump is her best bet, Charlie never introduced them so he doesn’t know ;).
Shazzeer chapter 14 . 10/17/2022
Ho shit, and that’s were Edwards revenge came and smacked Bella in the face. What will they do to her? Make her wear a recording device?. Make her spy in Edward? Will Edward know she spoke up and said she was the girl he’s been seeing?
Does Edward have a contingency plan? Does he thinks she’s in to deep to squeak?
Shazzeer chapter 13 . 10/17/2022
Awww, Edward has gone done gotten himself pussy whipped ;).
And Bella doesn’t know that she has him by the balls, she still thinks she’s just one little fuck toy to him ;).

We’ll see if the FBI catches on, and what it means that Tanya is there ;). Also Bella will be super pissed and horny.
Shazzeer chapter 12 . 10/16/2022
I wanna know what Alice knows!. And Bella just assumed as they had a fuck schedule. And it hurts that he didn’t tell her about LA. He should’ve told her, what if Charlie hadn’t brought Bella?. She would be waiting for him and he wouldn’t come get her.
Shazzeer chapter 11 . 10/16/2022
I don’t think that Jasper would be able to keep hid mouth shut because he likes Alice do much, he probably didn’t think he said something important ;). And staying away from Bella will only make it worse… she might catch on and ruin the plan ;).

And will Alice be accepted into the gang and be one in the theft ring? ;)
Shazzeer chapter 10 . 10/16/2022
Ha, Ernesta is officially off Edwards dick… Did Bella manage to get that info? It must be in the transcripts that Ernesta went on conjugal visits ;). And Edward is moving to where Bella is, he will be able to drop by or kidnap Bella for days on end ;)

Yeah, if he could he would keep Bella in bed for days ;).
But alas, she has school and Edward has things to do.
And Edward has been keeping a keen eye on her, even knows the toys she bought ;)
Shazzeer chapter 9 . 10/16/2022
No description on they toy she bough?. Was it at least somewhat Edward sized? ;). He is insatiable when he’s been without her for a while. He will wear her out at this pace, and she has t been sleeping so he needs to give her some rest ;).

He better give Jazz some time or Bella will really be pissed about no sleep ;)
Shazzeer chapter 8 . 10/16/2022
Toys are good, did she get a dildo with Edwards measurements? ;).
And he did seek her out and hit James with his car, several times! Bella will take Edwards head, both of them ;).

I can see Jazz and Alice get along quiet well ;).
Shazzeer chapter 7 . 10/16/2022
Pink princess and dark prince, fitting.
Of course Edward composed something with Bella in mind, to give his dick some rest ;).
Is it also a ploy to get her even more hooked on him? ;)
He said he was a very selfish creature, he won’t be able to stay away for long ;).

Did he introduce Jazz and Alice? Will they get along, or was it just the excuse to meet Jasper without suspicion?
Shazzeer chapter 6 . 10/16/2022
Ohh dang, Edward is gonna use Bella for revenge!.
Hmmm, he want Jazz to meet Alice… is he gonna try and push Alice and Bella together to have an even better excuse to see her without suspicion? And will Jazz be able to get Ernesta to divorce Edward?
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