|Reviews for Ride|
| CoffeeluvaNZ chapter 11 . 10/11/2010
Oh My, I officially love this story.
I completely adore Jasper and cannot wait for the next update! Well done!
Story has been recommended on TFFA twilightfanfic
| kimlostintwilight chapter 11 . 10/11/2010
Great chapter, filled in some story line and added more dimension to Jasper. I will confess that I went through a little Edward/Bella withdrawal especially after the insatiable previous chapter, kind of hard to go cold turkey after that. Looking forward to more.
| WutheringHeights1975 chapter 11 . 10/11/2010
Mother Fucker! Im in the heart of Brugge early in the morning right now, sipping a cold "warm-hot chocolate" and cold "warm apple tart" because i can't wait to go home later to read the update.
This is embarrassing i was the "Ride's silver medalist" l;ast update and now, im not even at the top 20. Boooooooo me!
You're making me smile Mahal na Reyna and Jasper and Alice tickles me. I was giggling like an eight month old infant..hehe
Maastircht is just 12 mins drive from my house, and maybe 10 mins steps from our old apartment before in Carabanerslaan straat... i just passed by Antwerp early this morning on my way here in Brugge. Maybe Edward can hire me to do something sneaky *wink*
" You really did find the car...yaaaaay"
"would you like to have sex with me? " Yes, Jasper i will if Alice wont.
I love this chapter...Thanks for the update.
| ADRIANA'87 chapter 11 . 10/11/2010
WoW.. this was beyond interesting..
Jasper is cracking me up! LoL
Can't wait to see what will Edward say/do!
Thank you for update!
| afonalaw chapter 11 . 10/11/2010
I love Jasper so much. How he is with Alice, so cute. Bird watching - fabulous! I admit I totally want Alice to get in on the heist, will wait and see what happens. Great job!
| IvoryAdulation chapter 11 . 10/11/2010
Dude, this story is awesome. Just the right blend of fuck hot characters and unbelievable crime.
| Insert Fangs Here chapter 11 . 10/11/2010
omg... i love jasper and the way he is with alice, so precious
| MarilagML chapter 11 . 10/11/2010
Umunti na ang mga lemons mo. :-) Kitang kita na ang plot.
| GreenEyes52 chapter 11 . 10/11/2010
| smallboots chapter 11 . 10/10/2010
That was actually one of my favorite chapters so far - not that I don't enjoy the smut, but Jasper is just precious. And seriously, that was well written, nice and concise.
| lozzy035 chapter 11 . 10/10/2010
wow jasper really cant talk to alice lol
wow he was angry about her leaving him
whats alice going to say hes upto
| brittany86 chapter 11 . 10/10/2010
love ur story its very hot and steammy
| TKegl chapter 11 . 10/10/2010
I just adore your Jasper... and it's so sweet that Alice can appreciate him, even though he is different. Really enjoyed this chapter...
Looking forward to seeing what happens next...
| Mari94 chapter 11 . 10/10/2010
Ohhhhhhhhh, what a great chapter. Interesting, I have no idea where you were take us next. Alice & Jasper - oh, I hope their relationship continues to go well. What is E up to - I wonder? :-) Thanks for the update!
| YellowGlue chapter 10 . 10/10/2010
this image stayed with me for DAYS and still makes all goosebumpy happy:
He asked me, sometime in the early evening, if I liked watching him, too. I said yes, because I did. I loved it when he'd arch against me, ramming his cock as far as it could go. His face would contort in passion; his mouth open, eyes closed...and he'd say fuck with each thrust.
Fuck...fuck...fuck...fuck, fuck, fuck, fuck.
That one - the eyes closed, mouth open, fuck fuck fuck - one.
Thank you for that.
I won't overshare anymore and totally weird you out lol, but just thank you. The slow fucking that's JUST as intense as the rough stuff makes all of me swoony.